Unfinished Business

[sylargrrrl]

Title: Unfinished Business
Words: 1,301
Rating: PG-13 for some violence and the threat of more to come if he has his say about it.
Characters: Sylar (with Mohinder heavily on his mind), Claire Bennet
Summary: Next part in my series that started with One Missed Call. Now it's Sylar's p.o.v. he's in California looking up an 'old friend' will Mohinder's

Comments

[catoasapun]

Oooooh, interesting! The way you describe the actions is just enthralling!

'...Sylar was far too busy trying to keep his puppet on its strings.'
Lol! I love this liiine.

I'm fascinated to see where you take this. ^_^

[sylargrrrl]

Thank you! And yeah, that's pretty much imo how Sylar saw Maya throughout their journey together. But now she's Mohinder's problem to deal with as later parts will show. Thanks for reading and commenting XD

[megmatthews20]

Totally second that fascination! (And these events could easily be what happens in the preview)

I love your description of Claire freaking out here, and everything happening around her without her knowledge. I can vividly see it.

Can't wait to find out what happens next!

cheers

[sylargrrrl]

XDD I cannot wait to see how the show stages this particular home invasion. And Claire's gonna try and fight as we know from the knife from the promos. So what happens next is gonna be a fightfightfight! :D Thanks for reading!

[levitatethis]

Very exciting chapter and I'm looking forward to Sylar vs Claire...it's no wonder he would want to seek her out - she has such a tempting power and one that would only widen the advantage he already has (not only being multi-powered but also able to control all of those abilities). The addition of sticking it to Bennet gives it a certain poetry in Sylar's mind, I imagine.

Sylar just can't walk away from Mohinder can he? Calling him from California to thank him? Not only could I see Sylar do it with a hint of taunting amusement, but subconsciously it's like he's asking Mohinder to stay on his trail (to think of him...to try to stop him). Why else present Mohinder the opportunity to warn the next victim? That darn weakness of Sylar's :-)

[sylargrrrl]

Yeah...he'll suffer (?) somewhat for that in the next part when Mohinder and Sylar meet again and the wounds are still fresh from the events of Powerless. They are both each other's greatest weakness as we'll see from Mohinder's end of things as well. Thank you as always for reading :D

[widestance75]

Great job. One of my favorite images from the S3 trailer is Sylar stalking and TKing his way through suburbia, so this was great. Very creepy and exciting.

Love!

[sylargrrrl]

Sylar in broad daylight in suburban California really made me squee XP So I'm very excited to see how the show uses that. Thanks for reading!

[bonniesrg]

I'm loving how you incorporated the promo into your fic.