Drabble: Life-like

[butterflyweb]

Title: Life-like

Author: Butterflyweb

Rating: R

Warning: fucked up!Mohinder, non-con, shortness

Words: 366

Summary: The Haitian took more than Sylar's memories. He took his mind.

A/N: Sort of works for the haitian memory challenge. Inspired by the Dresen Dolls' Coin-Operated Boy, the lyrics of which are in the cut.

He does his best not to think about it.

Comments

[ivy_b]

Oh, umm, ouch. I can totally see it happening and Mohinder trying to get any response out of Zane, and him being so.. Dead like. Poor Mo, he just wants what they once shared! *hugs them both*

[butterflyweb]

*pets mohinder* Poor woobie.

Thanks for reading!

[sesemperamabo]

O noes ;o;

This was ouch D:

[butterflyweb]

Eep. Sorries. :-P

:(

[runzu]

;___; Ouchies.

But wonderful writing. :D

Re: :(

[butterflyweb]

Thank you!

[violet_anchovy]

Quibble: there are times when Zane can respond to some stimulus to "smile and nod because it makes Mohinder happy," but he's totally catatonic and unresponsive during sex?

I'm holding out hope for some degree of rehabilitation (um, yeah, like fucking someone mentally disabled is somehow *better* than fucking someone who's catatonic?)

And I'm imagining Peter or someone visiting and being creeped out when he realizes there's only one bed.

But yeah, I totally enjoyed this.

[butterflyweb]

Quibble: there are times when Zane can respond to some stimulus to "smile and nod because it makes Mohinder happy," but he's totally catatonic and unresponsive during sex?

Yeah, you're right, that didn't make sense. I went back and edited. I think I just stuck that in there because I wanted to show some movement; I was afraid people might read it at first as Sylar being a corpse. Fixed now, though. :)

Thanks for reading!

[without_mission]

well that scared me senseless @_@ I don't know which line I like more, the whole thing's filled with deep pain ;_; Poor Mohinder...I can so imagine this happening, which is sad T_T (hugs Mohinder plushie) all will be well!