Fic: Break, rated R, oneshot ficlet.

[ladyvader]

Hi again, promise I'm not posting to pester this time :)

Just my first few shuffles back into writing fanfic, hope you guys like it :)

Title: Break

Comments

[ex_nothingto835]

I love this.

“Lay it,” he breathed, “… to waste.”

That line sums up an odd little fic kink of mine that I don't often see people explore- the notion that Mohinder could use Sylar's bizarre fascination with him to his own vengeful ends. The sexual tension here, too, is gorgeous. It's lovely and twisted and... yes, this is a great fic. Thank you for posting!

[ladyvader]

*blushes & dies of happy*

Thank you! That line's the whole reason I wrote it lol, just the idea of Mohinder's voice, y'know? lol

but yesh *g* Thankee :)

[neshel]

oooooh, this was different, I liked it. ^_^

I can definitely see Molly's death at Company hands prompting this kind of reaction in Mohinder.

I should say more, but words are failing me at the moment. My own fanfic is destroying my brain. XD

[ladyvader]

No no, don't let it do that.... save it for Sylar, and least you'll get to see something hawt right before you die ;P

But thankee for enjoying it lol, I cannae tell you how nervous new fics made me, so Thank You :)

[levitatethis]

Now this is a premise I find totally fascinating. In fact I have a fic I've been working on that vaguely touches on a similar theme of Mohinder...allowing/leading Sylar to engage in questionable acts. The story itself is quite different from yours, but in some ways it feels like a similar thought process.

It's an intriguing notion...Mohinder driven by anger and hatred to unleash Sylar, full force and with full understanding, upon those who he considers in the wrong.

You've really done a great job with the emotions here. The part that really hit me was this:

"“Mohinder,” he heard himself whisper, the word sweeping over both their lips, as his hands cupped the doctors heaving ribcage “What do you want me to do?”

Mohinder trembled, both hands now clutching at Sylar’s shirt front, body weight leaned in close, noses pressed tight.

“Lay it,” he breathed, “… to waste.”"

I don't even know where to start except to say....Awesome.

[ladyvader]

*gibbers and falls down*

Gah... to have YOU, you of the many fics that make me weep/shiver/squee etc enjoy it is just beyond fabulous to me :)

Thankyou so much, I'm so SO pleased you enjoyed it! *g*

[mabetini]

Wowww this was AWESOME!

I love Mohinder going into Primatech to save Sylar! I'm writing something kind of similar at the moment!

Wonderful!!!!

[ladyvader]

*uberblush* Thank You!

I'm so glad you enjoyed it :D and I'll look forward to reading yours as have enjoyed damn near everything you've posted in lurkerish glee til now lol shall be more vocal about it in the future ;)

thanks again!

[poemwithnorhyme]

Oh, I absolutely adore this as well! The idea of it is so hot and fascinating. Great, great job! ^_^

[ladyvader]

EEeee! <- embarassing noise of happiness

I'm steadily becoming a beetroot from happy blushing here! Thankyou so much!!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it :D