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Fic: Like Sunday Morning

Oct 17, 2010 12:33

Title: Like Sunday Morning
Author: starrdust411
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: Mohinder/Sylar
Rating: PG
Summary: For the schmoop_bingo challenge. Prompt: Lazy Sunday (Word Count: 1,271)
Disclaimer: I do not own Heroes.
Warnings: Humor, Slash
Author's Notes: I finally managed to get Bingo, but there are still plenty of prompts left on my Bingo card that I plan on filling.

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Comments 13

d'awwwww... errandofmercy October 17 2010, 16:57:01 UTC

:3 *SQUEE*

What an adorable snapshot! I love how snitty and yet oddly caring they are with each other... and how Sylar pops in and out of Mohinder's life without warning. >:)

well, I'm off to IHOP! can't wait to see more of those bingo prompts filled <3

Re: d'awwwww... starrdust411 October 18 2010, 01:52:50 UTC

LOL. I hope you really did go to IHOP because they are awesome

Thanks for reading and commenting. More prompt responses should be up soon :)

Re: d'awwwww... errandofmercy October 18 2010, 11:53:23 UTC

well, not really... but I did kind of hop around for a minute because the story was so cute :3

gaiafaye October 18 2010, 01:48:55 UTC

I think "hungry" and "horny" could be perpetual states of being for Sylar, so it doesn't really matter what he says.

Come to think of it, "jealous" could be a perpetual state too. I can see him extra-stalking Mohinder just to find out who these other men are. (And why Mohinder would even need them. I mean, heh, it's not like they could possibly be better lovers than Sylar, right? That's ridiculous. Ha ha! Completely ludicrous. Definitely impossible... They're dead. Soooo dead.)

starrdust411 October 18 2010, 01:53:30 UTC

LOL. I guess that means we'll have to say goodbye to Matt, Peter, Nathan, Bennet, and that guy at the corner store. They will be missed.

errandofmercy October 18 2010, 11:56:07 UTC

Seconded <3 that hungry/horny moment was my favorite line... I think one of my favorite things about Sylar is the contrast of his intelligence with his... ape-ishness?

aliassmith October 18 2010, 06:43:37 UTC

Waking up to find your arch-nemisis in your bed, spooning you and suggesting IHOP... only in Mylar would this make any sense :)
So sweet. I'd pity poor Mohinder, but then again... sleepy, rumpled Sylar... Shouldn't take too long before he comes around.

eternal_moonie October 18 2010, 11:23:01 UTC

love this new story of yours!

game_byrd October 18 2010, 15:05:42 UTC

Sylar's scary enough that without context, the dub-con here was a bit scary to me.

I mean, if they'd been together before and had an established pattern of putting up with other, a sort of implied consent, that's one thing. But if not... makes me uncomfortable.

You captured a nice, lazy morning really well. I loved your descriptions of how Sylar was lying there and the sleepy haze that comes with waking suddenly.

Nice story, very well written.

lastcutebender October 19 2010, 00:16:00 UTC

I don't see any hints of dub-con here. I mean yes, there will always be a bit of creepiness to Sylar, (I mean, he's Sylar) but I think starrdust411 does a good job at establishing a relaxed atmosphere between Mohinder and Sylar.

...that saved the two of them from being in a painfully familiar situation.

I think that line does a good job of setting up the fact that the two have had sex before and Mohinder is just kind of rolling his eyes thinking "Dear God, why do I keep doing this!?!". Besides, it's a fluff fic, I don't think dub-con has any place in a fluff piece.

game_byrd October 19 2010, 00:44:47 UTC

Maybe I've been reading too many fics where Sylar stalks Mohinder and his attentions are largely unwanted. But... let's say that person A kills a family member of mine and I hate person A with a vengence. I try to kill person A, but it fails. Person A demonstrates a lot of pent up sexual tension towards me. I find that... disturbing and have conflicted feelings about it (because I do think that Mohinder had conflicted feelings about Sylar from time to time ( ... )

starrdust411 October 19 2010, 01:52:22 UTC

I understand that this sort of thing is a very sensitive topic for you, I haven't walked in your shoes, I haven't lived your life and I am in no way telling you how to feel. Your feelings and experiences are your own.

In regards to this fic however, it is a humor story and when I label a story as humor/fluff/etc, I do not have anything such as dub-con/non-con in mind because that's not funny.

Looking back, I shouldn't have ended the story at that last line simply because it was just lazy writing, but the fact is, the way I see Mohinder/Sylar's relationship in this universe (this fic), Mohinder would have either rolled his eyes and pushed Sylar off or willingly slept with him again.