Fic: Arabian Nights - Ch. 2

[starrdust411]

Title: Arabian Nights
Author: starrdust411
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: Mohinder/Gabriel
Rating: PG-13
Summary: The story of a prince, a watchmaker, and the magical lamp that changed their lives.
Disclaimer: I do not own Heroes or Aladdin.
Warnings: Humor, Slash, AU, Language

Prologue| Chapter 1

Comments

[kojonoyuri]

Excellent once again!!!

Poor Gabriel is so stupid thinking Mohinder would love him less because they are from a different class. Silly boy. *pets him*

Keep up the great work! :D

[starrdust411]

Gabriel is just too insecure for his own good. He will learn though ;)

Thanks for reading :D

[eternal_moonie]

too awesome for words!!!!

Well done honey!

[starrdust411]

Thanks.

[gaiafaye]

OFF WITH HIS HEAD! Unless he meets a creepily benevolent old man in the dungeon.

I liked how you changed it to Mohinder just not really thinking when he gave away the apple. I always thought Jasmine was a little too naive in how paying for it seemed like news to her.

[starrdust411]

Creepily benevolent old man? What are the odds of that happening!?

Yeah, as I got older I thought that was weird too. It was Jasmine's one moment of fail in the entire movie. (Now everytime I watch the movie I think of the old Simpsons line "Money can be used in exchange for goods and services.") I couldn't make Mohinder that naive. Yeah, he does stupid things sometimes, but I don't think he would be that dumb :P