Fic: Hours (2/2)

Jan 10, 2010 00:42

Title: Hours (2/2)
Author: starrdust411
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: Sylar/Mohinder
Rating: R
Summary: This process takes several hours, but getting there took much longer. (Previous Part)
Disclaimer: I do not own Heroes.
Warnings: Slash, AU, Mpreg, Spoilers for Vol 4, Mild spoilers for Vol 5 (Just know who Emma is)

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mohinder plus powers, genre: au, rating: r, character: peter, fic

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gaiafaye January 10 2010, 07:10:16 UTC
You keep singing that same old song. If it isn't 'you killed my father,' it's 'this isn't your baby.'

lmao!

Even if your hobby used to be chronic masturbation, I would not care.

Something makes me doubt that if that really was Gabriel's hobby, Mohinder really would care. And now I can't stop imagining how the story would go if that really was Gabriel's hobby. XD

I like how Sylar's "multitasking" is sandwiched between his near-OCD and spooning. Oh, Sylar and his quirks!

Honestly, for a second I was afraid Sylar was going to steal the baby, but I guess he'll just be stalking doubletime now. I can imagine him following Mohinder to India, showing up at his door in some woman's form advertising himself as a nanny. It'll be like Mrs. Doubtfire, only even more disturbing.

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starrdust411 January 10 2010, 15:57:05 UTC
And of course while they were living together while Momo was pregnant it was also "You ate the last peanut butter cup you bastard!"

*Snort* It's just be a lot of Sylar in the bathroom screaming "Don't stop loving me!"

Because nothing is more annoying than someone constantly lecturing you about the right way to iron underwear. Not even splitting skulls open and forcing you to watch.

LOL the baby and Mohinder are a packaged deal. You can't have one without the other.

I can imagine him following Mohinder to India, showing up at his door in some woman's form advertising himself as a nanny. It'll be like Mrs. Doubtfire, only even more disturbing.

Holy crap! Now that image is stuck in my head! XD While Mohinder's away, Sylar would probably try to teach the baby how to be just like him and put black electrical tape over the baby's eyebrows to make them look more alike (although Sylar probably wouldn't like the baby nearly as much if he didn't look like Mohinder.)

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gaiafaye January 11 2010, 03:00:31 UTC
*Snort* It's just be a lot of Sylar in the bathroom screaming "Don't stop loving me!"

haha And crying while he does it. There's so much crying.

Certainly Mohinder and Baby No Name are a package deal, but that doesn't stop Sylar from thinking "hm, maybe if I take the baby, Mohinder will be forced to understand how he cannot deny me" or "hm, maybe if I take the baby and prove I can take care of him, Mohinder will see I'm the perfect daddy!" Or maybe I just can't stop picturing the utter sublime horror of Sylar doing that, with Mohinder unable to stop him. (I have never ever ever considered writing mpreg before and I am blaming you so hard right now.)

and put black electrical tape over the baby's eyebrows to make them look more alike

XD Oh my god. I imagine Mohinder's mom stopping by, and within five minutes calling Mohinder at the university asking why he lets her grandson be dressed in all black and have his hair gelled.

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starrdust411 January 11 2010, 03:53:46 UTC
LOL. Well now you're giving me sequel plot bunnies and I here I was ready to view this fic as complete :P (As long as I can convert at least one person to the mpreg side, then I have done my job :D )

Poor Mrs. Suresh. First her kid goes to America and gets knocked up and now she has to constantly watch her grandchild for future serial killer tendencies

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eridanie January 10 2010, 07:43:09 UTC
Awwww! That is so adorable! I always think that I am not going to read mpreg but then I always do and I always keep coming back like the weirdo I truely am, I can never stop myself. And that is just too cute. Whenever I read mylar mpreg it's always Sylar that's pregnant, so it's pretty cool how different this is. I can't believe how specific your timing is. I can never figure out such a perfect timeline for my stories let alone an exact date and time. I definitely admire that! I really love the medical aspects. Whenever people add all those scientific details in their fics I just go crazy for it! and yours are just dead on and believable! although I can't help but wonder what's producing the contractions in the absence of a uterus? Lol

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starrdust411 January 10 2010, 15:51:33 UTC
Well, I always tell myself to stop writing mpregs so much, but I keep doing it. So yeah, we're both weirdos :P

LOL, yeah, that's the one reason I'm grateful for the season 3 storyline of Momo getting that bug ability, because it allows me to play around with things and have him get preggers. I mean no offense to people who wrote Sylar as the pregnant one, I just don't like the idea of an unstable person being pregnant and caring for a child (which is why in all my fics Mohinder not only has the baby, he also fights to keep it away from Sylar)

This timeline was possible thanks to Heroes Wiki because I sure as hell couldn't figure out the timeline of season 3 (or season 4 for that matter).

This fic was also mainly inspired by me watching A Baby Story way too much, which helped me with "research" for this fic. My theory that the contractions were just the baby pushing down on his body, but I don't know how well that would actually work out, but... yeah.

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eternal_moonie January 10 2010, 12:52:22 UTC
AWESOME new chapter! Totally loved this fic!

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starrdust411 January 10 2010, 15:43:41 UTC
Thank you. Glad you liked it :)

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jackvelvet January 10 2010, 15:56:51 UTC
Great fic! I love how Sylar is both creepy and loving at the same time. Really fantastic!

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starrdust411 January 10 2010, 15:57:51 UTC
LOL. That's my favorite Sylar blend XD

Thanks for reading :)

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just_jane_doe January 11 2010, 00:56:10 UTC
really excellent 2nd half -- I wanted the baby to be a boy, too - how cute is a baby Mohinder!!!! Thanks for sharing this - it rocks and so do you!

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starrdust411 January 11 2010, 01:21:17 UTC
LOL. I'm reluctant to give Mohinder a girl since he already has a daughter (Molly) and I feel like a baby girl would replace her. Thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed the ending :)

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