Fic: Pounding Heart

[starrdust411]

Title: Pounding Heart
Author: starrdust411
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: Gabriel/Mohinder
Rating: PG-13
Summary: His heart would beat so loudly that it was all he could hear. (Sequel to " Sweaty Palms" and " Dry Mouth")
Disclaimer: I do not own Heroes.
Warnings: Slash, AU, Humor, Drama

Comments

Awww

[zagethe]

Awkward and sweet.

Re: Awww

[starrdust411]

LOl. That's pretty much exactly what I was going for :D

Thanks for reading :)

[gaiafaye]

FLUUUUUFFFFF ♥ ♥ ♥

I didn't realize "dinner" meant "at a restaurant" at first. Gabriel was doubly putting it on the line there, opening himself up for rejection in public.

The post-coital tears were definitely awkward, but sweet. ;)

[starrdust411]

I didn't realize "dinner" meant "at a restaurant" at first.

Oops maybe I should edit that and make it clearer. (I don't know why I always write public proposals when IRL I kinda hate them. :P)

The post-coital tears were definitely awkward, but sweet. ;)

LOL. I always felt that Gabriel Gray was just that sort of guy :P

Thanks for commenting :D

[eternal_moonie]

Very awesome fanfic! Loved reading it!

[starrdust411]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it :)

[anachro_nomad]

Hey.... There's nothing wrong with "Cry-maxing" .... >_>

[starrdust411]

Awww, sorry. I didn't mean to offend.

[anachro_nomad]

lol, oh no! I'm not offended. That was quote from Scrubs XD
In truth, I enjoyed the whole thing. You always seem to make the characters react in realistic ways, even if they are unexpected. Which I LURVE! :)

[starrdust411]

Okay. I'm glad. For a second I thought I had touched on a tender subject.

Thank you for reading and commenting :)

[themaskedmckay]

Oh man, I waas right there with Gabriel! Poor guy, it doesn't take much to make him a wreck!

I've really enjoyed this AU series. Thank you!

[starrdust411]

LOL. I'm glad you enjoyed it :D