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Fic: Dry Mouth

Dec 03, 2009 17:24

Title: Dry Mouth
Author: starrdust411
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: Gabriel/Mohinder
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Sometimes his mouth would get so dry that it hurt to talk. (Sequel to "Sweaty Palms")
Disclaimer: I do not own Heroes.
Warnings: Slash, AU, Humor

( Mohinder was the best thing that had ever happened to him, yet he could just pack his bags and leave if things didn't go well. )

character: gabriel, rating: pg-13, genre: fluff, genre: au, character: virginia, silliness, fic

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starrdust411 December 4 2009, 02:36:42 UTC

Thank you :D

anachro_nomad December 4 2009, 03:46:57 UTC

Awesome! I especially liked Gabriel's inner dialogue. It seemed very realistic :)

starrdust411 December 4 2009, 04:08:02 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :D

gaiafaye December 5 2009, 01:36:14 UTC

Haha, aw, poor excited Gabriel. Well, I'm sure Mohinder wouldn't mind helping him practice his endurance.

His last hope would be gone and he'd have to sell all of his furniture, move back in with his mother, and burn down his watch shop so that he would have no evidence that he had ever met Mohinder Suresh.

My favorite part. XD So dramatic. "MY LIFE IS OVER."

Very cut overall!

starrdust411 December 5 2009, 20:34:05 UTC

My favorite part. XD So dramatic. "MY LIFE IS OVER."

LOL. I'm glad you liked that line. I threw it in because I always felt that Sylar/Gabriel had a very extreme personality lol.

dirty_soap December 7 2009, 04:08:43 UTC

That was really sweet and hot. Gabriel is such a woobie and I love it.

starrdust411 December 7 2009, 04:29:24 UTC

LOL Thank you. I'm glad you liked it :)

dancingdragon3 August 27 2010, 01:44:06 UTC

"You're so beautiful," he found himself saying. "How could you even want to kiss me?" My heart is breaking on the floor. Seriously that was so sweet, and I loved Gabriel's internal monologue!