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Fic: Sweaty Palms

Nov 27, 2009 12:33

Title: Sweaty Palms
Author: starrdust411
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: Gabriel/Mohinder
Rating: PG
Summary: He never believed in love at first sight. Not even then.
Disclaimer: I do not own Heroes.
Warnings: Slash, AU, Humor

( Sitting and wishing can only get you so far. )

character: gabriel, rating: pg, genre: fluff, genre: au, character: chandra, fic

Comments 10

levitatethis November 27 2009, 18:02:17 UTC

Well isn't this an incredibly sweet story? I like considering the AUs where Mohinder is in New York with Chandra and meets Gabriel before he becomes Sylar. There are so many ways the story can go. You know I love angst, but I like the "happier" approach you've taken here, focusing on the attraction/connection that Gabriel feels for Mohinder as a crucial point.

starrdust411 November 27 2009, 18:14:44 UTC

Yeah, gaiafaye's take on the scenario definitely made me realize that Mo coming to the US with Chandra could still have dark results, but I like happiness and I feel like the only reasonable way of doing that is with Gabriel, not Sylar :P

gaiafaye November 27 2009, 19:52:01 UTC

Gabriel would have wondered why if the loud beeping of his heart monitor hadn't interrupted his train of though.

lololol I adore this image. Just Gabriel sitting there, Mohinder walks in, beep, beep, beep, beep, BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEPBEEPBEEPBEEP.

I know I took the darker route, but I felt kind've bad about it because with Gabriel there is so much potential for cuteness, as shown here. All of Gabriel's clumsiness, and his nervousness, and the pie, and worrying he's saying the wrong things... I just want to hug him. Here's hoping Mohinder can keep him on the straight and narrow. And that eventually they can move their research to a house in the suburbs with a nice white picket fence. ;)

starrdust411 November 27 2009, 20:43:42 UTC

LOL. Poor Gabriel can't help making himself obvious :P

Well I really liked your take because it was so realistic and logical. I just felt like doing something cute and silly since (overall) this pairing doesn't really allow for that lol.

Hehe, don't forget the 2.5 kids XD

themaskedmckay November 27 2009, 20:07:35 UTC

Aw! <3<3<3
And now I want Mohinder to beat his dad using the test subject he was going to abandon! >=)

This was so sweet and awkward and believable. I do think they could have been friends (and maybe more) had they met before Sylar started to emerge/kill.

starrdust411 November 27 2009, 20:45:25 UTC

LOL. I'm glad you liked my take on this scenario. I agree, I feel like Mohinder and Gabriel would have gotten along well if they'd met before Sylar ever came to be. :)

trulydemure November 27 2009, 23:24:01 UTC

Oh, I love the awkwardness of this fic. I could sense Gabriel's hesitancy and instant attraction to Mohinder very clearly. In fact, it made me feel nervous, myself.

starrdust411 November 27 2009, 23:43:24 UTC

LOl well if someone as pretty as Mohinder were around, I'd probably be about as nervous/awkward as poor Gabriel :D Glad you liked it. Thank you for reading and responding :)

trulydemure November 28 2009, 01:31:07 UTC

I know, right? Honestly. I dont think I'd drop my chai but I would certainly probably find myself staring quite rudely at inappropriate bits...

YW! ♥

dancingdragon3 August 27 2010, 01:40:29 UTC

Ahhh. I can't wait to see where this goes. I love shy awkward Gabriel.