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[myjulien]

AU Fic: Merboys (5/5)
Pairings: Sho/Aiba, Nino/Aiba
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2,553 / 8,346 (I write in Pages though, and it seems to count a lot of unnecessary things)
Aiba is a curious merboy. And yes, he strikes a faustian bargain to meet a human prince on land.
The final part, for joyeuxnoel and ph-otometry who both donated generously to the arashi_on fundraiser. I still owe

Comments

[thefortysecond]

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how am i supposed to put a coherent comment on this *sobs*

[myjulien]

Ahaha, that is nice, I might have wanted to wreak that effect on the reader. Thanks for reading and commenting! ♥

[nathaxpen]

Love it!! A bit sad that both Kazu and Masa had to die but sometimes that is how another life begins!!

I like the cutaways!! Specially the 2nd because gives me hopes that both live again and still together in their next life!!

hope you would write some more of this ..continuation of Kazu-Masa finally together?? still , if you want otherwise is ok...still like it as it is

:D :D

[myjulien]

Thank you for the encouragement! I'm really glad that you liked it. :)

Un, some time ago someone actually mentioned some possible 'missing scenes' or one-shots set in this particular universe which might be interesting to write so hopefully there'll be more in the future! :) Again, thank you so much for reading and commenting yo!

[aoihikari]

OH MAI GAWD MY HEART! ;~;bb <3

[myjulien]

Aww thank you! It means a lot to me that you read and comment! ♥ forever~

[miyawoks]

I'm wishing for some kind of continuation or even just a hint of a happy ending for any one of them...

But otherwise, it was beautiful! Thank you for the updates ^_^

[ph_otometry]

Oh, this! You!

I have always loved the way you write - it's lush and full of unexpected word choices that are so precise at the same time. And I love that you've finished (continued?) this story, and that you haven't shied away from the difficult ending. The emotional ache is just. There is this overwhelming sense of all of them being swept up in currents that are beyond their control, and I think the final scenes of this section demonstrate this perfectly. Also, that description of Jun - gorgeous. The cutaways, too, were lovely and so hopeful.

Thank you for writing this! ♥♥♥ It's good to read your work again.

fireworks

[myjulien]

You! You are the sweetest. Everything sounds better when you write it in your words. ♥ I know what you mean about the currents and I'm glad I managed to invoke that kind of response in you!

Squee thanks for saying that about Jun; I know I didn't spend nearly enough attention on him... perhaps (and only) in my head there is a sequel in which Jun pursues Sho on land and a dysfunctional relationship occurs.

Thank you for reading and for such lovely thoughts!