Comments | myjulien: arashi fic: spica

myjulien

arashi fic: spica

Dec 28, 2009 21:50

Spica
Pairings: Aiba/Nino, Ohno/Nino and Sho/Aiba
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2,498
Nino doesn’t know what he wants. Neither does Aiba.

( “Does it feel good for you?” Nino manages to grit out. )

fic, arashi

Comments 60

amaskuponthesky December 28 2009, 14:30:01 UTC

BRB NOSEBLEEDING.

myjulien December 28 2009, 14:54:18 UTC

Hahaha.

miscetera December 28 2009, 15:15:28 UTC

Eeee, I can't believe I've never read any of your stuff because I think I might be kind of in love with this loose, abstract style. The conflict unveils itself quietly, and I think that's beautiful. *___*

When Ohno holds Nino’s hand in his and remarks, as he is wont to do, “Nino has such cute hands”, Nino tastes the burst of bittersweet in his mouth. He feels Ohno’s eyes on the back of his neck, and smooths out his expression like water.

These lines are so gently pretty. Your Ohno, I adore him a lot. ♥

myjulien December 29 2009, 03:44:34 UTC

You don't know how my heart skipped at your comment because, truthfully, you are most probably my absolute favorite Arashi fic writer. I am so pleased that you liked my Ohno! ♡♡

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myjulien December 29 2009, 03:35:42 UTC

I adore Sho/Aiba too so I understand! And thank you for reading and leaving me such a lovely comment.

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rinalin December 28 2009, 16:11:57 UTC

Holy crap, this is SO UTTERLY BRILLIANT!

I kind of...love when Nino screws up relationships. And damn, if this wasn't hot to boot.

myjulien December 29 2009, 03:53:43 UTC

Thank you, thank you, thank you!

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nicefinalbeam December 28 2009, 16:55:54 UTC

It's amazing how you can get the reader to follow the story by reading what's not written as much as what is - that's a talent I've always wanted. This was really beautiful. Especially because every relationship you described felt spot on. ♥

myjulien December 29 2009, 03:49:36 UTC

I am delirious with joy- thank you! I've told you this before but your comments are a cornerstone of fandom for me. I am so glad you feel this about my portrayal of interrelationships in Spica.

♥♥