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Aug 12, 2006 16:07

Ed and Hank
Part 4: Very Early Sunday Morning
(Jus’ two ol’ cowboys ‘n love.)

By myeyesaintblue

Genre: Non-Fiction
Pairing: Ed & Hank
Rating: R - NC-17(?)
Length: ~1,450 words
Disclaimer: I know somewhere out there is a guy named Ed and a guy named Hank who at some point in their lives met the amazing Ms. Proulx and told them their story. Well, at ( Read more... )

Comments 34

senseofpeace August 12 2006, 22:59:31 UTC

Awesome way to start my Saturday night! This is such a warm story. I love how Ed explains what was really going on in his mind that first time. You bring a lot of humor to each character. I LOL'd at the end. Hope there's more!

myeyesaintblue August 13 2006, 05:10:57 UTC

Thanks Senseofpeace!

That was a LOT of words for Ed. Think he's pretty worn out from talking.

lindab2006 August 12 2006, 23:13:30 UTC

I love this story. I hope you continue!

myeyesaintblue August 13 2006, 05:12:45 UTC

Glad you like it!

aliceathome August 12 2006, 23:49:08 UTC

I so love this story. Don't worry - there's old guy stories out there and there's at least one posited on the idea that it's based on a real story but they are so completely different to this one that you've got absolutely nothing to worry about. Sweet and funny as ever. More please!

myeyesaintblue August 13 2006, 05:17:27 UTC

Thanks Aliceathome!

I wasn't quite sure what other similar stories might be out there. We were camping (no lie!) for large chunks of the summer and I wasn't really sure what might be out there.

myeyesaintblue August 13 2006, 05:29:36 UTC

Sorry -- I meant we were camping for large chunks of the summer and I missed a lot.

carol1943 August 13 2006, 00:04:26 UTC

Sweet and hot at the same time! Love it!

myeyesaintblue August 13 2006, 05:31:31 UTC

Thanks! Glad you thought it was hot. Hank and Ed love doing it and reading about it, but they're a bit shy when it comes to writing about them doing it....

fancycoyote August 13 2006, 01:21:08 UTC

"...think I love ya more every day.”
“Me too you, Rodeo.” Ed kissed Hank’s forehead, then grinned again, “‘Cept for last Tuesday. Ya got on my nerves somethin’ fierce tha’ day.”
“Tha’ so? Come ta think a it, You kinda took a big ol’ step backward Thursday. Regained tha’ ground ‘n more tonigh’ though. Tha’s fer sure.”

I love this story. Your dialogue is sweet and funny, and I love the comfort level these two have with each other. Looking forward to more.

myeyesaintblue August 13 2006, 05:42:06 UTC

Thanks Fancycoyote!

I always worry about the dialogue 'cause these two old cowboys sure do like to talk.