New Story: Persuasion

[myene_01]

New Story: Persuasion
Remus/Severus
NC-17
Warning: Slash, food sex, bondage, sex magic

Summary: Remus must convence Severus to allow an american holiday.

This story is part of an arc that is located at hp_holidays

Comments

[littlemissgg]

I'm not really a big Snape/Lupin fan but the promise of chocolate did it for me! This is good, one suggestion though, you might want to give it a good proof-read, there's a few typos which kind of break the flow of the story. Good work.

[myene_01]

This is the proof read version, heh.

scary, i know.

[k8matty]

.....BAHAHAHA!

That was hilarious

I LOOOOVE chocolate covered, bounded Snape. I'm not really a remus fan, but if I may...

****“I…what…GET ME OUT OF THIS NOW OR YOU’RE GOING TO BE A THROW RUG AFTER THE NEXT FULL MOON!” he yelled, trying nudge his wand out of his pocket.****

that line was worth the remus for me lol

The only reason I dont like Remus is because for some retarded reason, I ignored the books description and now I've got this unnattractive character in my head. I'm hoping if I watch the third movie enough, I'll get over my retarded mental image

Nice work darling
xxx

[myene_01]

thanks :D

I keep askign for a candy coated potians master for christmas, but so far no luck...*snicker*

3rd move remus is good, 5th movie remus is...not. I dont knwo if it was bad lighting or that the actor had aged funny or what.

[herbailiwick]

Love the avatar!

[myene_01]

thanks!