Round 2015: Sunsets with You

[mydeerangel]

Title: Sunsets with You
Prompt: 7
Rating: PG-13
Length: 4.3K
Warning/s: alcohol
Summary: Joonmyun decides that swimming and summer flings aren’t that bad.
Notes: Thank you, N, for all your help in writing this fic!

Comments

[nachtegael]

ahhhh this is so perfect, exactly what I had in mind when I prompted it !! thank you so much for writing this <3

He smiles brightly, and Joonmyun smiles back. Yeah, he thinks, he’s definitely drowned today. that was so great, the part about Lu teaching him how to swim and Joonmyun trying something outside his comfort zone, having to drown to swim TuT very touching and also so so cute !!

Lu Han tastes exciting, the glittering blue of the waters at day and the promising ocean breeze at night. It feels like Joonmyun can’t get enough, not when it’s Lu Han, so close yet so elusive, even now.
I love how you characterized them, flirty Lu Han who still respects Joonmyun's boundaries, and Joonmyun the smooth talked who loses all his cool in front of the cute boy uwu

+100 for ending with a promise they'll see each other again <33 thank you thank you thank you again, this story is lovely and sweet and now I really /cannot/ wait for summer to get here ^_^

[zsuness]

*sobs* i love summer!aus and this was such a niiiiice read.
thank you for writing it and sharing!! ♥

[fairyminseok]

Ahh this is beautiful and Lu Han teaching him how to swim is so cute ;;; and flustered Joonmyun is my favourite Joonmyun

And yes I love the ending <3 go visit Lu Han for your vacations bby

[krishoislove]

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This is so

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This is so perfect, for lack of a better word!! Shy Junmyeon really speaks to me here. The atmosphere you set up and the wistfulness, and how Luhan never pushes Junmyeon too far, is so wonderful and I just ^~^ THIS IS AMAZING. YOU ARE AMAZING. THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS!

[combatflower]

this was so cute and just cute I loved shy Junmyeon and surfer Luhan and JONGDAE xD thanks for writing ily❤️