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Mar 27, 2005 20:33


Thins is a poem i wrote

PLEASE read it and tell me what you think, be honest

i dont wanna keep writing if i suck, ya know. thanks



My future looks bleak

There nothing much to keep me here

My life is made of lies

False hope is all I know

The life I lead is nothing to special

Just another face in the crowed

Another soul in the dream catcher of the big celestial center

The tangled wed we weave of promises we know we cant keep

Will hold us back forever and will never let us go

The pain I go through everyday is unreal

I see everyone around me so happy

I want to break free

But these chains that hold me are too strong

I need your help, another hand

You can’t hear me you don’t want me

After years of pulling the chains break

The force of all my built up pain pushes me,

You guide me to the edge

I begin to fall this hole is deep it never ends

I catch an edge of the cliff

I’m holding on with all that I know

My head jerks up only for a moment

To see you, you’re happy

My heart was holding on with one last hope

You crushed me, did you ever care

Tears stream down my face

I loved you with all my being

I would have done anything for you

What did I do…I didn’t deserve you

I look at you one last time

I’m getting weaker

I let go
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