Comments | my_ani: Saving You, Part 1, Star Wars AU, Darth Vader and Luke Skywalker, Rated PG-13

my_ani

Saving You, Part 1, Star Wars AU, Darth Vader and Luke Skywalker, Rated PG-13

Feb 25, 2007 20:34

Title: Saving You, Part 1
Author: my_ani
Fandom: Star Wars
Characters: Darth Vader, Luke Skywalker
Rating: Rated PG-13
Warnings: A little bad language.
Word Count: 2120
Disclaimers: I do not own the rights to anything Star Wars.
Notes: Takes place after The Empire Strikes Back and before most of the events in Return of the Jedi. It takes an AU ( Read more... )

my star wars fanfiction, saving you

Comments 18

treenahasthaal March 3 2007, 15:28:59 UTC

Interesting take on what would happen should Luke be captured. Now I need to know who has flattened Luke! : )

my_ani March 14 2007, 11:13:35 UTC

Yes, wouldn't it have been great if there had been more interaction between Vader and Luke during the films.

Who flattens Luke...hmmmm.

mlgm March 3 2007, 20:57:06 UTC

Intriguing start for a Luke & Vader story. And Jamus is a very interesting addition. Greatly looking forward to the next chapter.

my_ani March 14 2007, 11:16:25 UTC

Thanks for reading. I had been undecided about Jamus at first because I really don't like creating a new character. But I needed for there to be someone around Vader and was hesitant about using any of the officers except Piett and there have already been other stories done focusing on his relationship to Vader. So...Janus was born.

erboo March 7 2007, 22:43:43 UTC

Fascinating start, interesting portrayal of Vader and the mysterious Janus. Hope to read more soon.

my_ani March 14 2007, 11:17:46 UTC

Thank you for reading! Do you really think Jamus is mysterious? He's probably the most down-to-earth person you'll find, especially on Vader's ship.

jedinemo March 9 2007, 18:40:03 UTC

Thought I had read this when I saw the rec from mlgm, but I guess not! Love to see where this goes- I'll be watching.

my_ani March 14 2007, 11:19:38 UTC

Thanks! It's always wonderful to know someone likes a story well enough that they're interested in the next chapter.

I'll have to thank mlgm for the recommendation.

vikkir March 9 2007, 19:17:04 UTC

Ooh, what a promising start. I can really buy this situation. I feels very Vader-like to have procurred Luke and be pretty satisfied with that. And your characterisation of Luke is lovely. I can't wait for more of this.

my_ani March 14 2007, 11:22:03 UTC

Thank you! Yes, it's like, okay I've finally captured my son and got him safely on my ship. Cross that off my to-do list. But poor Luke will be frustrated with that. Everything's unfinished but Vader's just going about his daily business, or so it seems.