Title: A Phone Call
Chapters: 1/1
Author: me (mxtrxofsomer)
Genre: Angst
Ratings: PG-13
Pairings: Aoi x Uruha
Synopsis: Did you like the flowers? I really hope you did.
Comments: Hi! I’m new here. This is my first time posting and this is my first finished Aoi x Uruha fic. I have a lot but they are not yet finished. I have been writing my first chapter
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It's good though. It doesn't suck! Cheer up :D
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i cried you know,
so don't say this sucks.
coz this made me feel stupid
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me doesn't want you to feel stupid.. anyway, thank you so very much.
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It's truela sad and beautiful, and I love the style you used!
But... I don't know what to think of the two last sentences *feels like an idiot who doesn't understand anything*
was it all a dream and he woke up? or did he fall asleep on Aoi's body?
*waits for the other AoixUruha*
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don't feel stupid..
my intention was to put multiple endings..
it can mean three things based on people's preference..
1. uru calls reita cause he's going to follow aoi, just to make sure somebody finds them
2. uru calls reita cause he wants to inform him that aoi is gone, time to move on, for aoi's sake
3. aoi made sure that someone would check on uru after he made his plan and that would be reita too..
so, that is it.. again, a lot of thanks! ^_^
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I had the dream in mind but I think I like your: uru calls reita cause he's going to follow aoi, just to make sure somebody finds them best!
Glad you finally chose this style because it wouldn't be the same with the usual
Thnks to YOU for writing and sharing :)
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*hugs*
good ending choice.
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I was a able to picture everything perfectly. I loved it! This was really sad, but I couldn't help but love it because of the sadness.
You shouldn't doubt your writing ability. ^-^ It's beautiful.
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thankies so much!!!
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