A Phone Call

[mxtrxofsomer]

 
Title: A Phone Call
Chapters: 1/1
Author: me (mxtrxofsomer)
Genre: Angst
Ratings: PG-13
Pairings: Aoi x Uruha
Synopsis: Did you like the flowers? I really hope you did.
Comments: Hi! I’m new here. This is my first time posting and this is my first finished Aoi x Uruha fic. I have a lot but they are not yet finished. I have been writing my first chapter

Comments

[shoshomiki]

AWww... so sad Dx

It's good though. It doesn't suck! Cheer up :D

[mxtrxofsomer]

wow.. thank you so much.. i really appreciate that. you really cheered me up. ^_^

[scottskydweller]

aww. this is sad~
i cried you know,
so don't say this sucks.
coz this made me feel stupid

[mxtrxofsomer]

waaahh!! don't feel stupid.. *panics*
me doesn't want you to feel stupid.. anyway, thank you so very much.

[onariah]

How can you say this suck?? 0_0

It's truela sad and beautiful, and I love the style you used!

But... I don't know what to think of the two last sentences *feels like an idiot who doesn't understand anything*
was it all a dream and he woke up? or did he fall asleep on Aoi's body?

*waits for the other AoixUruha*

[mxtrxofsomer]

waahhh!! thank you so very much.. i wanted to write this the usual way but i can't imagine it without using this style so i chose this. it's a bit hard though.

don't feel stupid..
my intention was to put multiple endings..

it can mean three things based on people's preference..

1. uru calls reita cause he's going to follow aoi, just to make sure somebody finds them

2. uru calls reita cause he wants to inform him that aoi is gone, time to move on, for aoi's sake

3. aoi made sure that someone would check on uru after he made his plan and that would be reita too..

so, that is it.. again, a lot of thanks! ^_^

[onariah]

oh ok, well it work 'coz I had many ending in mind (I just wanted to know what you have in mind to be sure I was not betraying your idea)
I had the dream in mind but I think I like your: uru calls reita cause he's going to follow aoi, just to make sure somebody finds them best!

Glad you finally chose this style because it wouldn't be the same with the usual

Thnks to YOU for writing and sharing :)

[mxtrxofsomer]

glad you appreciate it. ^_^ it really means so much to me...

*hugs*

good ending choice.

[ame_ko]

(Sorry for the late comment!)
I was a able to picture everything perfectly. I loved it! This was really sad, but I couldn't help but love it because of the sadness.

You shouldn't doubt your writing ability. ^-^ It's beautiful.

[mxtrxofsomer]

glad you were able to picture everything.. actually, im not fond of sad stories because they make me sad to.. but yeah, its the same for me~ hate and love sadness at the same time.

thankies so much!!!

[bubu_chan]

Omg I just noticed this *is a loser* and odgmdgf I read it and it really made me want to go on my knees and yell 'WHYYY' as stupid as it sounds. asDnjdfnfndf It's so sad D: and stop being so hard on yourself! This doesn't suck at all. I really really liked it. The way you wrote it, so freaking awesome omg please stop rocking so bad. ♥

[mxtrxofsomer]

oh so you found this one eh? i was so nervous when i posted this. it was my first time posting, this was one shot and the hardest part was, the style was an experiment.. so yea~ i thought it sucks. but the feedbacks were great. really overwhelmed~ hated myself for doing this though.. if its aoi and uru, i want happy endings... XDDD so weird... anyway, thank you so much~ *huggles*

[bubu_chan]

I like stories with bad ending sometimes even if it makes me sad XD XD XD Don't think it sucks, it doesn't! *hugs back* ;3