Fic: Irony; October 1

[apohdiopsis]

Title: Irony
Author: apohdiopsis 
Pairing: Lily/Sirius, Lily/James (one-sided), James/Sirius (friendship)
Rating: hard R/soft NC-17
Word Count: 500-ish
Prompt: Day One 
Warnings: angst, underage sex, drunk!smut, language
Summary: Goal number four--accomplished.  (In retrospect, it should have been more specific.)
Author's Notes: My goal is to write one fic per prompt

Comments

[inverts]

... I've just discovered that I absolutely love the idea of Lily and Sirius being a thing of some sort before Lily and James hook up. Thank you very much for a delicious fic. I really, really, really loved your characterization of Lily, all the descriptions and the dynamic between the two of them, and the last couple bits about Padfoot and Prongs. That was great.

[apohdiopsis]

:) Thank you so much for a delicious review. My Lily's pretty well fleshed-out, fortunately, and as I haven't posted much on LJ yet, you'll probably see a lot of her and a lot of the way she sees the other characters. Maybe in a future fest I'll challenge myself, but I'm a busy bee this semester!

<3

[trinityday]

Quite hot, for all the awkwardness of the sex. But then maybe I just have a soft spot for Lily/Sirius, especially when Sirius knows just how fucked-up it is to be doing this with the girl James is head-over-heels for.

[apohdiopsis]

I am the queen of awkward sex scenes, just you wait and see!

... And if you have an idea of the implications of this for my bedroom skills, you'd be correct. ;D

<3

[museme87]

You managed to capture awkward, teenage sex really well here. I like that it wasn't perfect, that there wasn't any real, romantic love between Sirius and Lily, but simply sex with a sort of deep affection. Sirius' musing on James--how they were always a unit, but now a unit no longer--was well written. I especially enjoyed the last line.

It's great to see some Sirius/Lily here, btw! :)

[apohdiopsis]

Yay! I'm glad all my awkward teenage years paid off!

I actually 'ship Sirius/Lily even less than I ship Remus/James (which is to say, not at all), but for some reason, I have a feeling that they'll be showing up at least once more in my fics for this fest. Sigh.

[eprime]

Fabulous raw snippet of teenage life and the kind of thing that can happen among people who've grown together in close quarters. The last line is great.

[apohdiopsis]

It must be interesting, I think, to grow up with such a small, tightly-knit group for seven years.

[snegurochka_lee]

OH, a;lksjdf;lksj !!! One of my favourite pairings ever, and aaaah, done so well! I love the short word count and how you use each word so well to paint this scene. The bit about Padfoot and Prongs is inspired, whoa. He's right: James would never forgive him, but also oof, so completely believable that this could happen. Hot and sexy and angsty -- love it!

[apohdiopsis]

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