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Fic: Finding Time; Day 3

Oct 10, 2010 17:52

Title: Finding Time
Author: gorthead
Pairing: Remus/Sirius
Rating: R
Word Count: 994
Prompt: Day 3
Warnings: Naked boys in bed!
Summary: Remus and Sirius share secrets, happy to discover they have much more in common than they thought.
Author's Notes: I wrote this outside in the sunshine while eating sorbet, so…pure fluff ahead!

( ’How did this happen?’ Remus murmured. )

c: sirius black, c: remus lupin, fest: mm&h, p: remus/sirius

Comments 5

eprime October 10 2010, 17:29:55 UTC

Mm...loved this intimate moment between them--the headiness of emotion from their discovery of each other and new love. Very nice.

liebedance October 10 2010, 20:46:10 UTC

Oh, I liked this a lot. It was super cute and intimate - not just about sex, which I liked. I especially liked the exchange about James' level of gayness and Binns' HoM class. And I loved the use of the prompt, the way you interwove that train ride into the conversation.

museme87 October 10 2010, 21:52:52 UTC

Sometimes you just need some R/S fluff, and this is a prime example of how it's done. I loved how you incorporated the prompt into this, how they both have sudden realizations about one another at different times. I'm in agreement with liebedance: the bit about James' sexuality and Binn's HOM class was very funny. So was Remus' cheeky comment afterwords.

werewolfsfan October 11 2010, 23:15:18 UTC

"Chick Flik" moment For the Win!

apohdiopsis October 16 2010, 23:44:12 UTC

This is very real for me. It might sound like sort of an effeminate conversation for two boys to have, but you really understand their history. Remus and Sirius aren't used to stable, loving relationships, and Remus especially must have been terrified of losing any affection he had, so to discover that the person they're longing for has been longing for them back ...

It's certainly something that would need a lot of explanation.