Mad - General Hospital Fic

[mute90]

            He wasn’t supposed to go anywhere. No one ever saw him when she was awake. He never left her bedroom when she was asleep. But there he was: in a cemetery with her half-wit of a brother pointing a shotgun at his face.

“Hello, asshole,” Michael said.

A mocking smile appeared on Keifers face. “What do you think you’re gonna do with that

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[simply_aly]

I loved this so much. I loved that the voice was so true to Keifer's views on his and Kristina's relationship yet, all the while, the reader is able to see the faults in his logic. And, of course, Krissy's (ironic) parting line was perfect.