Tom was fun. He needed to die in a blaze of glory, or be President. President DEFINITELY did not fit in this fic, especially given how utterly unrepentant he was about shooting the Quorum. (The one time I made him Pres, he didn't get to shoot them.)
I agree with Bear- for all that I do like Hoshi, and I love the idea of Dee, those stars really should have gone to Felix. ::sniffle::
With Racetrack and Narcho, I did want to show that there were perks to this tech. There is no other verse I can make a case for this tech, and I still can't totally get behind what Adama and Roslin did to Felix, despite the fact his mutiny cost so many lives, but BSG is the one verse where I really could make a case for the Dollhouse tech being used with consent. Laura would never, EVER go in for the sexual aspects, and there ARE so many gaps in the skills pool.
As a whole, this story probably could have been a bit shorter--the earlier chapters could maybe have been condensed a bit
This seems to describe all of my writing ;)
Thanks so much for reading, and for all the comments!!!!
I agree with Bear- for all that I do like Hoshi, and I love the idea of Dee, those stars really should have gone to Felix. ::sniffle::
With Racetrack and Narcho, I did want to show that there were perks to this tech. There is no other verse I can make a case for this tech, and I still can't totally get behind what Adama and Roslin did to Felix, despite the fact his mutiny cost so many lives, but BSG is the one verse where I really could make a case for the Dollhouse tech being used with consent. Laura would never, EVER go in for the sexual aspects, and there ARE so many gaps in the skills pool.
As a whole, this story probably could have been a bit shorter--the earlier chapters could maybe have been condensed a bit
This seems to describe all of my writing ;)
Thanks so much for reading, and for all the comments!!!!
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