Fic: Imposition 3/?

Apr 15, 2009 07:54

Title: Imposition (3 ( Read more... )

nite owl, fic, rorschach, comedian, watchmen

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sara_rojo April 17 2009, 00:04:37 UTC
not to mention coming to terms with his heretofore completely unsuspected bisexuality, which was another biggie

Welcome to the realm of fanfiction, DanielXD

Probably not it: Just by the by, I have this video recording here on my ship of you alternately fighting and having sex with a sociopathic sublingual reject of evolution - care to put this in a rational context for me?

Or: Sooooo…gay, huh? With your attitudes toward the entire range of human sexuality, that’s gotta be a bitch.

Have I said how much I love you Dan voice? I LOVE IT
This is pure WIN

Funny story, Daniel - the Comedian keeps asking to borrow my clothes and the mask I never, ever take off, and I let him, for some reason, but they’re returned to me smelling of scotch, cigars, and anonymous male prostitutes. How weird is that?

I wish Rorschach had even a slight joking bone in his body and say this for realXD

He raped me, Daniel, and it’s left me all broken. Please fix me with your magical healing cock.

XDXDXD
Pure, genuine WIN, I tell you. Magical cock indeedXD

Leather daddy veterans reeeeeally turn me on, not nerds in spandex.

BEST. DEFINITION. OF COMEDIAN. EVER

nearly colliding with a man loitering practically on his doorstep. He disentangled himself, getting only a jumbled impression of a wool overcoat with the collar flipped and a panicked hrnk!

Stalking much, Rory?XD

I loved your Laurie, and I love the little details you give about Nite Owl's inventions, the good and the errors in the making ^^
I loved the whole...ambience you gave to the riots. I loved the crazy woman shooting at everyoneXD, and how Nite Owl assesed the situation, and you conveyed the chaos quite well. Your Rorschach fighting was amazing (I love when he's described as a blurr, he's fast as a cat), and how the punks run away just from seeing himXD
I liked the conflict with the old man, and I understood perfectly Nite Owl's anger and frustration and general disgust with the world and everyone on it at that time

“Are you hurt?” he managed to grit out as he climbed into the ship, biting back another sarcastic comment.

Apologizing and this. Dan can't help being Dan even now ^^
Beautiful reference to wanting to see stars. And equally beautiful how Rorschach awkwardly wants to reassure him, and how his admiration pours from his words. SO CUTE =^_^=

Amazing that Rorschach was the one to confront him. Way to go, Rory!!! You're improving ^^
And Dan just snaped. Good for you, Dan, in the long run. You'll seeXD
(it WILL be good in the long run, won't it? *glucs*)

“This is ridiculous. We’re going upstairs to have a civilised cup of coffee, for once. I won’t avoid you, you won’t kill me, and we’ll be friends again. Capische?”

That's how you do things, Dan ^^

“Walter Kovacs?” Daniel read, and blurted out: “You’ve got a record?”

OMG, moaritenao, you writer-slave. I order youXD

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mustinvestigate April 22 2009, 21:20:21 UTC
The leather daddy description was actually one of scarlet_carsons's comments on the first Rorschach/Comedian story - it cracked me up for days, and I had to steal it :)

I got a bit meta here, I have to admit - every smexing scenerio I ran through in my head got a Dan comment as above. If Dan was less intellegent and snarky, he'd already be getting some... Will pick up the story in a week or so - for the moment I took a break and wrote a bit of silly PWP drunken porn as a break - should be up tonight or tomorrow.

Thanks as always for the lovely looong comment! You really feed my writing bug.

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