Stories I've Never Written
This was going around a couple weeks ago and sounded fun. I spent time today trying to come up with stories some of my friends had never written and enjoyed it so much, I thought I'd give it a try. Besides, my muse could use the jump start.
Give me the title of a story I've never written, and feedback telling me what you liked best about it, and ( Read more... )
Give me the title of a story I've never written, and feedback telling me what you liked best about it, and ( Read more... )
The last sentence: She owed her so much and would have said so, but Amita’s full lips pressing hers drown out the words while those talented fingertips gliding over the bare skin of her breast erased all other thoughts from her mind.
The thing that made me want to write this: I’d never written femmeslash before… so I figured, why not Amita/Liz? If for no other reason, that is a whole LOT of beautiful for one pairing.
The biggest problem I had while writing this: David wanted to be the love of Liz’s life. He wanted to be the man who helped her raise her son, to be the man to teach him how to play ball and how to laugh and how to be a man… a good man. But he conceded that Liz and Amita would do just as good a job and he considered himself lucky to at least be a part of her life and her son’s as well. (Let’s also mention the fact that having a visual of Amita/Liz permanently embedded in his brain gave him something to smile about… frequently.)
This almost never got posted: I just wasn’t sure I did the relationship between Liz and Amita any justice. Like I said, I’d never written femmeslash before (though I desperately wanted to), but I was nervous that this would pale in comparison to many of the other wonderful slash/feemmeslash pieces that have been posted. I’m thankful my friends didn’t let me get away with that train of thought though. Now that it’s posted, I’m going to have to write some Liz/Nikki just for the fun… or holy shit! Liz/Amita/Nikki! *spontaneously combusts*
The one scene that hit the cutting room floor I wish I could have salvaged: Let’s just say the last sentence wasn’t really the last sentence. There was a very passionate scene between Liz and Amita, where Amita was able to completely erase all the worry from Liz’s mind… but considering the feel of the rest of the fic, I got a little carried away with the porn and the scene just really took away from the whole point of the story. I’m not saying it wasn’t a delicious distraction, but the scene needed to be saved for a more appropriate time.
Reader’s should also know: Yes that WAS Kimball Cho that Liz referred to in the opening paragraph. What? He’s pretty. I had to keep him in here too.
Also, for those interested… after Liz’s advice, Don chose Emily. He knew that’s where his heart truly belonged. *sighs
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"Unca David!"
>Don chose Emily.
good choice.
(I don't envy him having to decide; Liz probably told him - off-page - if he was feeling religious, "No Don, you can't be like the Patriarchs") ;)
Don/Cho? bad muse! give Mustangcandi time to recover from the Liz/Amita first ;)
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AAAAAAAAAH! *flails* OMG. That's adorable!
Don/Cho? Hmmmmm... that's an interesting idea. I always pictured Cho as more Colby's type. LOL. But then again, maybe that's just me wanting the best of both worlds... Cho/Candi/Colby. That's my kind of sandwich. BWAHAHAHAHAHA.
OMG. Clearly I need to be getting some work done. The lack of productivity has rotted my brain.
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have fun at work - and stay safe.
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you are far too kind. thank you.
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Prompt me for a birthday fic. :)
*hugs you*
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{well, that and the fic you sent me}
>Prompt me for a birthday fic. :)
by now, you probably know me better than I know me. anything you think I'd like.
(but you have to tell me - here or in PM - what you'd like for your birthday fic}
*huggles you much*
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As for my birthday fic, if you feel so inclined, I'd gladly accept anything the muse has to offer. David/Liz, Ian/Nikki and Colby/Callie are my favorites (duh, you know this already) but you're so good with the AUs. Maybe something from that stories you've never written meme with Cho and Callie and Colby or maybe even a scene from that TV series you wrote Cal's Immortals or... whatever. LOL. I'm not hard to please (and I'm clearly no help whatsoever.) :)
Edited to fix misspelling. Told you my brain was jelly. (The fact that I've also had Callie in a coma for a week and she just woke up in this fic Tina and I are writing is also messing with my brain. LOL.)
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- I'd gladly accept anything you have to offer except anything the muse has to offer -
...because you know how nuts my muses can be.
you will never ever lose your mind.
Callie's in a coma? use your super-chemistry knowledge to save her!
requests noted. thank you.
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*hugs*
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(well, at least one Gary Walker, if not all of them)
ps: *hugs you*
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