this is like all my favorite things wrapped up in one fic. THINGS I LOVE ABOUT THIS FIC: - them becoming best friends by fighting. - the insult Bootface. MADE OF WIN. - e asking vince to see his bruises/welts/etc. wahhh. - vince not knowing why he kissed E. that's SO VINCE. - "sprawled all over on the couch watching hellraiser"= the CUTEST image ever. - the whole thing about Queens. so interesting!!!! - Vince telling ERIC it's ok about the abuse. so fucking heartbreaking. - turtle's pot soup! HAHA. - "Vincent Chase, best friend since they were six years old, and he's fucking kissing him back, sinking his nails into that goddamn oversized t-shirt and hooking him in close." you write like a movie. in a really good way. i can SEE that, and you include the perfect amount of inner dialogue- it's so great. :] - the whole 'there never was a california'- ridiculously heartbreaking. oh, oh, oh, VINCE! - "His vocabulary has been reduced to two words. 'Vince' and 'hey'. " hahaha. E. - the way they were such BOYS.
this was great. definitely write more if you want! man, i love coming-of-age entourage fic. super fab.
- them becoming best friends by fighting.
- the insult Bootface. MADE OF WIN.
- e asking vince to see his bruises/welts/etc. wahhh.
- vince not knowing why he kissed E. that's SO VINCE.
- "sprawled all over on the couch watching hellraiser"= the CUTEST image ever.
- the whole thing about Queens. so interesting!!!!
- Vince telling ERIC it's ok about the abuse. so fucking heartbreaking.
- turtle's pot soup! HAHA.
- "Vincent Chase, best friend since they were six years old, and he's fucking kissing him back, sinking his nails into that goddamn oversized t-shirt and hooking him in close." you write like a movie. in a really good way. i can SEE that, and you include the perfect amount of inner dialogue- it's so great. :]
- the whole 'there never was a california'- ridiculously heartbreaking. oh, oh, oh, VINCE!
- "His vocabulary has been reduced to two words. 'Vince' and 'hey'. " hahaha. E.
- the way they were such BOYS.
this was great. definitely write more if you want! man, i love coming-of-age entourage fic. super fab.
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This made me feel so good about myself too XD Thank you so much for the comments, they really do make my day. Perhaps week!
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