Title: Applied Linguistics Rating: NC-17 Word Count: 497 Prompt: Kink for week 5 at rwhg_ladws A/N(optional): Thrilled to have won the week 5 challenge! Thanks to all!
Liked the dialogue; it wasn't forced and just seemed natural. If they were actually put in this situation in the book, (hah we could only wish) I picture them doing and saying nothing else than what you wrote. You do Ron's pov so well. It was a guy's mind with no censors and I really enjoy reading that kind of pov. The profanity and dirty talk just did it for me.
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