Nov 16, 2010 19:00
most will awe at the setting sun, a soft kind magic is undone
swoon for colors mouthwatering, a couple's love is blossoming
they be always quick to see it set, it's true nature not there till morning's bet
golden and yellow downy unfurl, a majestic brilliance of flamboyant curl
my eyes awake in those first few hours, seeing the rising sun's true powers
but everything is as it should be, let the naive lovers feel free
i can know and be burdened down, of compassion I hold the everlasting crown
so i will promise to keep her secret, something i've learned i must respect
and even i will admire as her confidence unfolds, my time to feel free at what it all holds
:) what do you think?