Looks like I've reached the current end~ It's been a fun read, though, and I'm certainly looking forward to more! ♥ So many things have yet to be cleared up, after all~ And nothing keeps one reading like a good mystery and some suspense~
The chapter feels that way, maybe, because it's an intermission, and really, what can one do while waiting for point A to become point B? ^^ But I still ♥ your characterizations and all the little in-parenthesis inserts ("burn it, Will, burn it!" Tho that's somewhat motherhen-ly of Liz XD and all of Jack's lines)~ Jack being addicted and worldly and Will being Will and a maybe a little dorky~ And the issue of trust comes up~ One has to wonder which Elizabeth is the act... if either are at all. Hmm, the advertisments were a nice touch, I think ^^ It's something that really is a kinda punk element, like dirt and dregs and drugs etc. ^^ Anyway,descriptions: lighter than some of the others in metaphors, perhaps, but nice as always~
Curious, though, is Jack being sarcastic with the whole "seaside" and "island" comment (considering there are no longer any seas for a long time) or does Tortuga simply retain it's past well and it's common knowledge?
Yes, 'fraid there be no enlightening nor useful comments from me- ah wells, I'm a little too tired to comment properly, perhaps XD;
Thank you so much for reading! I've got to go back and rewatch both DMC and AWE enough so that I feel comfortable incorporating events, situations, and characters from the two into this series. But I hopefully will be able to write some more of it this summer. It's on my list of things to do, after I've fulfilled some obligations (I still have to write a story for yuri_challenge and make a few vids first).
The chapter feels that way, maybe, because it's an intermission, and really, what can one do while waiting for point A to become point B? ^^ But I still ♥ your characterizations and all the little in-parenthesis inserts
Good thing you like the characterizations. There were a few things I lucked out on, like Jack being attracted to Elizabeth in the second movie and her becoming a pirate lord. But the ending I had planned originally will have to be modified.
Curious, though, is Jack being sarcastic with the whole "seaside" and "island" comment (considering there are no longer any seas for a long time) or does Tortuga simply retain it's past well and it's common knowledge?
It's a holdover from when there were seas. They still have the areas sorta marked out and call them by their old names, but there's no real ocean there anymore. Like a lot of things in the series, the characters are keenly aware that they've lost something, but they never know how exactly how much is lost.
Looks like I've reached the current end~ It's been a fun read, though, and I'm certainly looking forward to more! ♥ So many things have yet to be cleared up, after all~ And nothing keeps one reading like a good mystery and some suspense~
The chapter feels that way, maybe, because it's an intermission, and really, what can one do while waiting for point A to become point B? ^^ But I still ♥ your characterizations and all the little in-parenthesis inserts ("burn it, Will, burn it!" Tho that's somewhat motherhen-ly of Liz XD and all of Jack's lines)~ Jack being addicted and worldly and Will being Will and a maybe a little dorky~ And the issue of trust comes up~ One has to wonder which Elizabeth is the act... if either are at all. Hmm, the advertisments were a nice touch, I think ^^ It's something that really is a kinda punk element, like dirt and dregs and drugs etc. ^^ Anyway,descriptions: lighter than some of the others in metaphors, perhaps, but nice as always~
Curious, though, is Jack being sarcastic with the whole "seaside" and "island" comment (considering there are no longer any seas for a long time) or does Tortuga simply retain it's past well and it's common knowledge?
Yes, 'fraid there be no enlightening nor useful comments from me- ah wells, I'm a little too tired to comment properly, perhaps XD;
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The chapter feels that way, maybe, because it's an intermission, and really, what can one do while waiting for point A to become point B? ^^ But I still ♥ your characterizations and all the little in-parenthesis inserts
Good thing you like the characterizations. There were a few things I lucked out on, like Jack being attracted to Elizabeth in the second movie and her becoming a pirate lord. But the ending I had planned originally will have to be modified.
Curious, though, is Jack being sarcastic with the whole "seaside" and "island" comment (considering there are no longer any seas for a long time) or does Tortuga simply retain it's past well and it's common knowledge?
It's a holdover from when there were seas. They still have the areas sorta marked out and call them by their old names, but there's no real ocean there anymore. Like a lot of things in the series, the characters are keenly aware that they've lost something, but they never know how exactly how much is lost.
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And ahh, an interesting backstory on it~ How much is lost, huh? It's definitely the sort of thing that gives itself to musing~ ^^
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