Fic: Beautiful Solution (Firefly, River/Mal)

[musesfool]

Title: Beautiful Solution
Author: victoria p. [victoria @ unfitforsociety.net]
Summary: River knows where she's not wanted, and, more importantly, where she is.
Rating: Adult
Spoilers: obliquely for the movie
Disclaimer: Joss's, not mine.
Archive: Achromatic.
Feedback: Makes my day
Notes: Thanks to hermionesviolin for looking it over and to mousapelli for listening to my

Comments

[trinity_clare]

That last line is beautiful. I love lines that take all the words before them and squish them down into one line.

[musesfool]

Thank you so much!

[gobi_rex]

Ok, those reservations about Mal/River that I had a few weeks ago - this fic addressed them all and then some.

River's thought processes are so perfect here (plus, I can totally identify with her trying to quantify and derive and find an equation).

And I love the last line.

[musesfool]

Hee! Thank you! I'm so glad it felt in character, and made sense to you.

[inathunderstorm]

*whimpers*

Oh, that was just beautiful!!

[musesfool]

Thank you!

[mollita]

I LOVE YOU SO VERY, VERY MUCH. This is so heartbreakingly beautiful, and so, SO very River, and hot to boot, and I honestly don't even have the words to express how much I adore it. Just -- you've totally made my entire freaking day.

[tylergrrls]

Thank you for rec'cing and I agree let's smother Vic in so much love she has to run away from us!

*SMOTHERS*

-Bree

[musesfool]

*curls up on Bree's lap*

Thanks, darlin'.

[musesfool]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it. And thanks again for the rec. I really appreciate it.

[pearl_o]

Eeeeee, Mal/River YAY. This is lovely, my dear.

[musesfool]

Thank you!