fic: The Last Hurrah (The West Wing; CJ/Toby; pg)

[musesfool]

The Last Hurrah
The West Wing; CJ/Toby; pg; 555 words
Toby has a thing for lost causes.

Thanks to luzdeestrellas for looking it over. Written for the West Wing title project.

Comments

[maidenjedi]

Wow. Toby gets hit hard again, and this is so believable I almost want to go back and check for signs in season six!

Really terse and sharp writing, too, which fits Toby so well. Great job!

[musesfool]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad it worked for you, and sounded like Toby.

[leviathan0999]

Jesus!

Can somebody help me spool my guts back up off the floor, untangle them, and put them back where they belong? I suppose I could ask CJ or Toby, but hell, they couldn't even untangle the panty hose!

[musesfool]

Score!

I mean, um, thank you. I'm glad it worked for you.

[thistlerose]

Oh. When you said you were doing Toby/CJ, I I was expecting funny bantery hijinks. For some reason. But this gave me that good sort of ache. I can hear Toby and CJ. I love it.

[musesfool]

Heh. Thanks. I think there should be funny bantery CJ/Toby hijinks. I just... wasn't in the right place to write them.

[aworldinside]

Oh, that last line is gorgeous.

This was so them.

[musesfool]

Thank you so much!

[krazykitkat]

*Ouchies*

Wonderfully angsty.

[musesfool]

Thank you! I'm glad it worked for you.