Comments | musesfool: fic: Here Today (FNL; Julie/Tyra; pg-13)

musesfool

fic: Here Today (FNL; Julie/Tyra; pg-13)

Jan 28, 2008 09:18

Here Today
Friday Night Lights; Julie/Tyra; pg-13; vague spoilers through "There Goes the Neighborhood;" 605 words
"Boys are stupid."

Thanks to luzdeestrellas for looking this over. Written for the West Wing title project.

( Here Today )

froplay, fic: friday night lights, tyra collette, tyra/julie, julie taylor, west wing title project

Comments 16

kassrachel January 28 2008, 14:32:27 UTC

"We're gonna have girls' night in."

Damn.

:-)

This is delicious.

And I love

As soon as the words are out, she can feel her face burn with embarrassment, like she just asked Tyra to go steady or something lame like that.

Oh, JULIE. Yay.

musesfool January 28 2008, 17:15:26 UTC

Thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed it! And thought that sounded like Julie. I feel, as a teenage girl, she probably thinks in italics all the time. *g*

maidenjedi January 28 2008, 15:27:59 UTC

Wow, that's hot. Perfect thing for this chilly Monday morning. :-)

musesfool January 28 2008, 17:15:58 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

femmenerd January 29 2008, 01:58:51 UTC

Oh! This is really great.

musesfool January 29 2008, 02:43:01 UTC

Thank you!

anonymous January 29 2008, 03:21:53 UTC

Sorry I don't have much to say about the story; when I'm not familiar with the canon, I'm not likely to be terribly interested in the fic, unless I can cry over it (yeah, I'm just weird like that). But I wanted to ask, are you sure this is really PG-13? Because it seemed a little more like R to me. I don't know, it's just based on the other stuff I've read, which is mostly m/m - perhaps that's rated differently from femmeslash? Because I sort of thought that, as a general rule, when a fic includes a phrase like "when she comes" (i.e., when it describes the climax of a sex scene), then it's R.

Anyway, it's not that big a deal...I wasn't traumatized or anything - just curious.

musesfool January 29 2008, 04:00:52 UTC

There's no explicit reference to genitalia, and they're both fully clothed. I don't think non-explicit dry humping merits an R. YMMV.

anonymous January 30 2008, 01:01:57 UTC

Oh okay, that makes sense. Thanks for the explanation.

musesfool January 30 2008, 01:16:15 UTC

No problem.

leiascully January 29 2008, 04:05:17 UTC

Mmmm. Who could resist the girlslash? I love the detail about the hair pulling, and the bits about Tim. And of course, the dynamic between the girls, and being safe and snug at home.

musesfool January 29 2008, 04:36:53 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm so glad you liked it, and that it felt like them.