Comments | musesfool: Fic: Pilot (Firefly; River; gen)

musesfool

Dec 26, 2007 19:18

Pilot
Firefly; River; g; 138 words
Flying is like dancing.

Thanks to luzdeestrellas for looking it over. For the West Wing title project.

( flying is like dancing )

Comments 25

gwenfrewi72 December 27 2007, 00:40:20 UTC

Lovely use of imagery. Loved it.

musesfool December 27 2007, 18:52:18 UTC

Thank you!

alixtii December 27 2007, 00:55:31 UTC

Yep. And I feel like I felt River's excitement at the end.

musesfool December 27 2007, 18:52:41 UTC

Excellent! Thank you.

trinity_clare December 27 2007, 01:16:54 UTC

What a fantastic use of such a useless episode title. :D

musesfool December 27 2007, 18:53:14 UTC

Hee! Thank you! I admit, I was like 'Pilot? Seriously?' but then I thought of River, so it all worked out.

kassrachel December 27 2007, 01:27:45 UTC

Oh, my dear, this is beautiful. I've missed the way you write her.

musesfool December 27 2007, 18:53:48 UTC

Thank you so much! I've missed writing her, too.

shehasathree December 27 2007, 01:31:43 UTC

*g*
i can feel that joy bubbling up, too. thank-you for that. :)

musesfool December 27 2007, 18:54:10 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm so glad you liked it.