if i ever get out of here
Arrrgh!
How do people do this!? (only the interrobang can convey my frustration right now)
I've just figured out how to make the casefile part of this story work better - it involves rearranging the order of scenes, which, fine. Be that way. I hate doing it, but I know it'll make the story better, so I will do it.
HOWEVER.
Doing that means I have to also move a conversation that is important to the characterization/relationship part of the story, which works better where it is currently situated.
The obvious solution is to come up with a second conversation that can slot in earlier so I can keep the one that's later where it is, but I am completely blanking on that. So now I am kind of stuck in neutral - can't go forward until I fix what comes before, and can't figure out how to fix the earlier part so I can keep going forward.
Arrrrgh!
Also, and I don't mean to sound ungrateful, but I think I am allergic to the flowers my bosses got me for Admin Asst's day. I am all itchy throat all the time since they arrived, and the scent - lovely in small doses - is making my sinuses hurt. But they are still too fresh to be rid of without comment, unless I mime taking them home and then just dump the flowers on the way. But that feels rude and ungrateful, so I cannot do it.
Arrrrgh!
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How do people do this!? (only the interrobang can convey my frustration right now)
I've just figured out how to make the casefile part of this story work better - it involves rearranging the order of scenes, which, fine. Be that way. I hate doing it, but I know it'll make the story better, so I will do it.
HOWEVER.
Doing that means I have to also move a conversation that is important to the characterization/relationship part of the story, which works better where it is currently situated.
The obvious solution is to come up with a second conversation that can slot in earlier so I can keep the one that's later where it is, but I am completely blanking on that. So now I am kind of stuck in neutral - can't go forward until I fix what comes before, and can't figure out how to fix the earlier part so I can keep going forward.
Arrrrgh!
Also, and I don't mean to sound ungrateful, but I think I am allergic to the flowers my bosses got me for Admin Asst's day. I am all itchy throat all the time since they arrived, and the scent - lovely in small doses - is making my sinuses hurt. But they are still too fresh to be rid of without comment, unless I mime taking them home and then just dump the flowers on the way. But that feels rude and ungrateful, so I cannot do it.
Arrrrgh!
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