fic: One bowl of kisses (HP; Sirius/Remus)

[musesfool]

Okay, a bunch of people requested Sirius/Remus kisses when I offered kisslets, so I kind of tied them together into one loose story.

So this is for angel423 (requested by northernsky_), invisigoth_17 (requested by spikeyboots), luzdeestrellas (requested by lyras), kashmir_ki_kali (requested by melayneseahawk), underlucius (requested by gehayi), and fleshdress (requested by wildestranger)

One bowl of kisses
HP; Sirius/Remus; 1,085 words
Remus kisses him, a tender thing, all

Comments

[dcdevotee]

...the echo of a thousand kisses past, the promise of a thousand kisses more.

Oh, this is lovely. I love deep, dark S/R, but it's nice to temper it with the happy stuff sometimes. This combines the best of both, playing in the light but aware of the shadows too.

[musesfool]

Thank you!

[gehayi]

This is perfect--a little bit sweet, a little bit sad, and completely loving. And thank you for giving their love story the happy ending that JKR has so far denied them.

[musesfool]

Thank you for reading and commenting. *g* I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[amberlynne]

Aw man. It's almost a little crazy how happy it makes me when you post a new story. *dreamy sigh* I love it all because there is pining and kissing all over the place. That's never bad. But this:

Though there's no need for words, Remus likes them and Sirius likes saying them, all the things they didn't say before, spilling out now in endless conversations about Harry and the Order and the war, about everything and nothing, in the space between lip and tongue and gasping breath.

is my favorite bit. I love thinking about them just talking all the time about anything because they have 13 years to make up for and yes.

Also, I was afraid you were going to end it with OotP and then you went and brought him back which made me six thousand times happier. Just wonderful.

[musesfool]

Thank you so much! I'm happy you're happy. *g*

Also, I was afraid you were going to end it with OotP and then you went and brought him back which made me six thousand times happier. Just wonderful.

Yeah, I wavered on weather or not to bring him back, but I couldn't not. Sigh.

[kyasuriin]

oh these are all so lovely. thank you for sharing, made me smile :)

[musesfool]

Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[getaway_machine]

This is great -- I love the look into moments in their life, briefly happy moments. Amazing. :D

[musesfool]

Thank you.