Fic: Three's A Crowd [ 3/? ]

[museme87]

Title: Three's A Crowd
Author: museme87
Pairing(s): Brian/Justin, Ben/Michael, Mel/Lindsay, Ted/Blake, Deb/Carl
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Over the course of his and Justin's seven year non-relationship, Brian had never been one to say no to a third party addition. But when the addition is far more permanent and redefines playroom for the worst, Brian thinks

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[moonbrightnites]

You should see me bouncing around in excitement over this update. Wheeeee!

It's not fucking cuddling; he doesn't do cuddling. But this sort of lying next to each other, legs tangled and arms draped, isn't so bad.

Oh, Brian.

And maybe Brian can admit to himself that that's the reason why he held back on romantic gestures afterward. Beyond the safety of Liberty Avenue, he could never know what display of affection would get Justin another bat to the head.

Oh, man. Poor Brian.

Brian's never really seen that look on him before, and it kills him to know that he never has and never will be the reason for that expression.

*sniffles* This just kills me. Poor Brian, hurting because he's no longer the first priority in Justin's life. :(

I love the way you write Michael, BTW. I'm not a Michael fan at all and so I'm always impressed when someone makes me think he's actually a worthy friend for Brian (and Justin as well.)

"Well it's not usually my policy to blow men in front of my daughter, so it looks like you're out of luck."

But this made me laugh out loud, literally! Actually lots of it did. I love the way you balance the angst with the funny.

Awww, that ending just hurts. :( I hate seeing Justin disappointed. :( Damn you Brian, stay with him!

[museme87]

I'm very happy to know you find Michael tolerable here. I always stress over finding a character's voice, but knowing that you felt like you did really gives me a boost of confidence.

Don't worry. Justin won't be disappointed forever, but we all know that there has to be a lot of disappointment in the beginning for these two. :)

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