Fic: Three's A Crowd [ 8 ] (2/2)
Title: Three's A Crowd
Author: museme87
Pairing(s): Brian/Justin, Ben/Michael, Mel/Lindsay, Ted/Blake, Deb/Carl
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Over the course of his and Justin's seven year non-relationship, Brian had never been one to say no to a third party addition. But when the addition is far more permanent and redefines playroom for the worst, Brian thinks ( Read more... )
Author: museme87
Pairing(s): Brian/Justin, Ben/Michael, Mel/Lindsay, Ted/Blake, Deb/Carl
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Over the course of his and Justin's seven year non-relationship, Brian had never been one to say no to a third party addition. But when the addition is far more permanent and redefines playroom for the worst, Brian thinks ( Read more... )
I really do agree with you on the whole Brian thing. His portrayal in the story is a bit skewed to highlight how much he doesn't give a damn if he's gay and how proud he is. But, as you pointed out, he obviously had some serious hang-ups about it as well. I wish we'd gotten a little more of his back story as far as that goes. We know he was bullied by some jocks at school. Actually, I'm curious to know how Claire found out. I wish their relationship would have been explored a bit more as well.
The Justin/Brian/Trevor (as in Justin/Brian, Brian/Trevor, lol) dynamic is an interesting one imo. I've really just started to figure out Brian and Trevor's history as well as flesh out Trevor, and it's been pretty funny. Trevor is a lot like Justin in some manner of speaking and a lot like Brian in others. I think it's those Brian attributes that draws Brian into considering him as someone he fucks more than once in the first place.
The next three or four chapters focus pretty heavily around how Trevor affects Brian/Justin. You'll learn more about Trevor, see Trevor and Justin interact, and ultimately find out how Justin is going to deal with this surprising turn of events.
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