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@ NAME OF THE COMMUNITY
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@ homeless / psl
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➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

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@ idolbook
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➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

(been playing snsd for a long time, but it's my first shot at her. afraid I'm heading in the wrong direction, so go nuts.)

[goguma]

We haven't had time to play together yet but I'm looking forward to getting to know your Sooyoung better ^^

[says]

Here's to the future~

[says]

Your Sooyoung comes off like she's trying too hard. I'm not sure if that's because you're just starting out and haven't gotten her voice down yet, she appears more 2 dimensional than anything else. It seems to be a extreme exaggeration of the way her personality is. I hope that as more time goes on you can refine her voice so it isn't as over the top!

[royeol]

@ ringback
royeol
➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

Extremely new but first impressions or later use is great.

[sudowoodo]

They just started talking but Sungyeol seems like the loud choding kid that he is. I can't give much critique since that'll call for more talking and perhaps some scening. Best of luck with him! He's an adorable and fun kid to play ^^

[aegyu]

I haven't had a chance to talk with him yet but I'm so glad we've got a Sungyeol, you have no idea. ;; Our little family is complete at last. I'm really looking forward to interaction, though. ^^ ♥

[goguma]

@idolbook
goguma

➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

[goguma]

Took way too long, haha. I hope our two muses can continue to bond together. I think Seohyun can sort of show a more silly side of herself around Sunny which is refreshing for both of them. Thank you for the comment :*

[goguma]

I know that Seohyun is known for being bland and such, but wow, this muse is

really

boring.

Almost nothing she says adds to the conversation. When there's a discussion going on she adds the bare minimum and it's usually some obvious comment. Even her entries are I did this. Now I am doing this. Here is a quote. Here is a picture. It's literally like playing with a robot. I think, just maybe, you might be taking it a little too far?

[redigitized]

@ lotteworld
redigitized

➀ Characterization (how IC/OOC my muse is; how my muse sounds when chatting online/texting)
➁ Writing (what do you think of my writing when we scene)
➂ Praise / Others (anything else you might have to say about me/my muse)

He'd been quiet for a long time and I'm getting back into the swing of playing him, so anything you have to say would be great! If you have anything to say about the other kids, please don't hesitate!

[onestar]

Why would I switch journals.

You know how I feel about Ricky. It's annoying, I tried to think of actual crit and I can't think of any. He's always fun and dynamic and regardless of who I've played against him in comms or psls he's so fun and different to each person. It never gets boring to play against him. ♥

;; ... yeah... That's all I got.

[chanhee]

We see him as a very cute, sarcastic little brat that sometimes can get on my muse's nerves BUT he covers it all up with his cutesy act and speech. Gah, I have very little to say since my muse's only around for what? Less than a month? haha. In the end you know your kid better and we think he's just as adorable as the real is. Keep doing what you're doing!