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[lockpickey]

Your writing is perfect and Jinki is perfect. Oh and you're perfect too.

I could honestly leave you with this alone because I'm not sure how to elaborate on such perfection haha I mean, even your awkwardness with your muse and his own awkwardness as a muse comes across as so Jinki. Does that make sense? He's the typical case of flaws that make someone perfect. I'm sorry though I'm kind of biased toward the real so I'll always be a little spazzy when talking about him and perfect muses of him (i.e. yours). There isn't just awkwardness about him though, there's this genuine and almost painful (for me and Kibum anyway) concern that he always has inside him and that Kibum would seriously beat out of him if he was the type to do that sort of thing haha he may try one day though be prepared jk ;; I know every group's leader care a lot for their members but not like I feel Jinki does, and maybe not to such extent yet (because my freaking muse is never around) but I'm so glad to find that in your muse as well. God I could go on about him forever.

Writing with you is a challenge in every possible way and I'm sorry if I'm no match for you, it's a bit shameful to say I'm doing my best but these days all I really want is to get something done at all. But if you ever feel like I'm getting too bad at it please tell me and I'll do what I can not to disappoint anymore.

By the way I might kill you if you don't keep him around ^__^ /creepy

[shiningtofu]

I'm.... seriously so touched right now! lmao. Especially with you being such a big fan and all, it makes me happy! It's been worrisome trying to figure out a good way to balance his awkward with his... leaderness, so I'm glad that it's been nothing that seems to overstep any boundaries with you or Kibum! And lmao! Just don't bruise the merchandise in visible places~!

Why would you think that? D: Seriously, the scene was great both times! Just being able to write Jinki with Kibum is nice for me, so it will always be welcome! You're definitely not a disappointment with it at all ♥

He's staying, he's staying!!! Put the knife away~ lmfao

[lockpickey]

Seems like the truth can sometimes touch instead of hurt~ XD There shouldn't be any boundaries (apart from the natural ones lol) between our muses, actually, but since we know the reals, I can totally understand your worry. It seems like there could be a small almost invisible barrier between the two, but honestly? It's their loss they don't know what they're missing out on XDD

Okay, just don't make me pull the knife out again. XD