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Nov 16, 2010 15:13

Title : A matter of strawberries
Beta : haru_ran
Poster : unknowntibidip
Genre : AU / Humor
Pairing : Yunjae
Length : 4 / ?
Rating : PG for swearing words
Summary : They have always been rivals, fighting over customers. But what if someday they had to work together ?
A/N : I'll tag chap per chap by the way. The genres that will appear in the fic are: AU, Humor, ( Read more... )

band : dbsk, fic : a matter of strawberries, pairing : yunho/jaejoong, length : chaptered

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museelo November 16 2010, 14:14:34 UTC
Spot for yukimiya87 and Cecilia :)

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yukimiya87 November 16 2010, 17:42:00 UTC
unf, SPOT! \O/
Even though there's no exact flashback (and by that, I mean an entire set of italicized paragraphs :P), you were able to explain why Yunho and Jaejoong hates each other so much! XD

“Wait. I’m handsome, Of course I am. Now, how can I turn this into my advantage?”← LOL, this is coming from a guy who has a Hello Kitty mirror with him all the time. TRUEFACTS.

The latter part was so hilarious. So much hate for cucumber. Poor vegetable. :))

Thank you so much for this update! I hope you can update soon. I'm really liking this story. <33
*LJ keeps on messing with my comment, WHY D:*

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museelo November 16 2010, 21:18:28 UTC
Oh. I'm sorry then.

Well, I don't know, I'll see when I update..

Thank you for reading and sorry for disappointing you.

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this update made me happy yukimiya87 November 17 2010, 05:06:03 UTC
.__. um, no I'm not disappointed hun. T^T I really like this update. :D

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Re: this update made me happy museelo November 17 2010, 08:01:28 UTC
But it didn't turn the way you wanted it, so yeah I'm sorry.

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blackcherriess November 17 2010, 02:01:32 UTC
thanks babe(: *big hug*

as much as i absolutely adore jae but his treatment towards yunho is just too much?! it's really no wonder there's the escalation of tension between both of them! but i can't wait for the tension to turn into fireworks instead! hehe

Yunho groaned when he bumped his feet in one of his stick. The impact of the action made one of the remaining nineteen balloons to be carried by the wind. And Yunho choked back tears.
me = laugh = mean! have i told you how much i love how you portray yunho? you make him seem so much more vulnerable, so much more like a human, susceptible to all sorts of feelings.

LOL at how hyori obtained her info! we'll see more of her i hope? i'm so glad that yunho has a best friend(: and who is the cucumber guy???!! *excited* i just adore how you write about the cucumber part! hilarious!

♥ this lots!(:

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museelo November 17 2010, 08:04:10 UTC
Thank you. I wanted to show once again that he really is a perfectionnist and if something it not under his 'control', he sure has some human feelings.

I'llt ry to include her again, I think.
Yeah, well, I... err... I don't know yet who's the guy too *cough*
Oh and thank you for the cucumber part, for once, it was made to be funny.

Thank you for your comment ♥

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blackcherriess November 17 2010, 13:21:26 UTC
going to sleeeeep soon! i still to comment on some fics hehe(:

LOL but that's good. the cucumber guy can just be anyone! hehe you should totally reveal his identity at the end of the chapter or something so that we can all guess!

xD i know i laugh at inappropriate things sometimes!

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