I need a little help. I'm writing the sequel to 'Learning' and have reached a point where I need a little help. How would the Doctor go about fixing a broken arm? Or is there a way of writing about it without writing about it, if you know what I mean... Help?
Here's what I have so far. Thoughts desperately desired.
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Ground Rules (unfinished) )
I have two versions in my mind at the moment based on yours. One is just your first idea where basically he can fix it easily but it's a bit sore for a little while and she has to be careful with it.
The other is where he can knit the bones together, but has to set it the traditional way first. That's one thing that always bothered me about most of the sci-fi medical stuff I've seen. It's all fine and dandy to say that you can knit the bones back together, but what if they're out of line? I might go with that way. Except I don't know much about the setting of bones. I've only ever broken bones that can't be set (a finger once and a couple of toes).
Have you ever broken a bone that had to be set? If so, what's that like?
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Btw, the idea of him angsting about having broken both his girls is just too cute for words. Kudos if you can put it into words. Bless, love 9th, he can be so cute.
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