Early Morning Departures

[musclemuseum29]

Title: Early Morning Departures
Author: mm29
Rating: medium 16?
Pairing: belldom
Summary: There's only so much that one can take.
Disclaimer: I own zilch.
*Warning:* Just language for the moment, though in future -if there is one for this- it will become more violent, dark and slashy.. .
Notes: A supermassive thank you to

Comments

[dolce_piccante]

you did it! and holy hell, what a story this is! your writing is WONDERFUL and i feel so much for matt...you really did a fantastic job of explaining his emotions while also advancing the plot and filling the reader in on things from the past...this was unexpected (belldom stories are typically horny and blissful) but i can't wait to read more.

All I can think about is us and where we’re not heading. It’s not like I thought this would last forever; inevitably you’re going to have that desire of marriage and children again, and this time I won’t be able to talk you out of it. Eventually, you’re going to get sick of all this masquerading around and pretending we’re just best friends. You’re going to tire of the scepticism and prejudice we receive and those looks you can never quite ignore. I’d never stop you from what you want but I thought we had a little longer left, and I think the saddest thing is how none of that matters to me if I’m with you. If I can’t have children, and have to keep this secret and know that someone will always be looking at us, but I can have you, I couldn’t care less.
that whole paragraph is just so heart breaking...so heart breaking.

can't wait to see what's next!! congratulations! *hugs*

[musclemuseum29]

*falls over* wow..well you know I definitely couldn't have done this without you luv :) wonderful? Lol, thankyou! - though in comparison to your beautiful devine smut I can't say I agree, but thankyou:)
And dw, this will get more violent and rough; i just needed a set up for Dom's bastard ways-plus I do like sad storylines...it's the romantic sop in me that likes to shine through, the bastard of a thing that it is.
Thta paragprah too was my favourite :) I sort of wrote it based on what a friend told me about his love, and it always kind of stuck..
*hugs* You're still the best!

[dolce_piccante]

that's awfully sweet of you to say :) but i just helpe dyou with technical stuff..this story is all your brillian, my dear :D

ooo i'm so looking forward to the violent/rough/sad storyline...you wrote this chapter so well and you definitely set dom up well...that paragraph is just...gah...i reread it just now and it still is so emotion...i'm super pumped to see what's next :)

awww! you're too sweet! *hugs back*