A Tale of Two Earthquakes ... Or Not --CYA Challenge Re-Post

[murielle]

Prompt: Firefly, BtVS crossover, AR, GP

Main Characters: Dawn and Zoe

Additional Characters: (Surprise! And at no extra cost!)

Specifics Requested: Zoe interrogating Dawn after an earthquake
A blue scarf, and plenty of sarcasm

Word Count: 2095

Disclaimer: All JW/ME’s

Feedback: Please!

A Tale of Two Earthquakes … Or Not.

"Hey!" Dawn squealed with delight

Comments

[deird1]

Oh, this is wonderful!

This was my request, actually - and it's so incredibly fun! Thank you for writing it!

Lines I liked:
"Technically you were unconscious, but I did ask first."

fast would have made with the whirl, which would have led to the hurl

the beautiful (mean) woman’s face

"Dawn, tell me you haven’t been cooking, again?"

I loved Dawn's weird cookery, Zoe swearing in Chinese, Dawn's babbling about her ENTIRE family history, and... oh... everything with Wash in it.

Well done!

Thank You So Much!!!

[murielle]

Now, this is the very best comment I could ever get. I'm so glad you liked it. I was really, really hoping you would--even though I didn't know who you were till right now.

Sorry about the locking earlier. Never even thought of it. So, seriously, thanks for telling me.

::Dancing with joy::

Happy now!