Chasing Pavements - A Doctor/Martha Vid

[vezharkness]

Title: Chasing Pavements
Song: Chasing Pavements
Artist: Adele
Made By: Me a.k.a Verity
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters/Ship: Doctor/Martha
Summary: Martha is hopelessly in love with The Doctor but she can see that sadly its not reciprocated so she wonders should she give up or keep on chasing pavements even if it leads nowhere. At first she's

Comments

[neth_dugan]

It's a good vid, and it does tell its story with a definite tilt towards Martha's PoV which is important here. And I like your use of black and white.

And, in an attempt to actually be useful *g*, the pacing is a bit slow for my taste but understandable given the speed of the song. And the vid relies heavily on the editing built into the show but even if the clips you have are well chosen.

It's good vid all round, and nothings perfect, but hey - that's why we continue to do things. Because we get better. And I enjoyed watching it, even if I don't usually look at Doctor/Martha vids or fics.

ETA - I re-read this and it could be read as mean. If it does, I'm sorry, trust me when I only want to be useful. The number of times I've made something and wished people would say something useful rather than just 'ooooo, liked that , bye!'. So I try to offer constructive crit when I can (and do so often to one of my fave fan artists).

[vezharkness]

Don't worry about it, it doesn't sound mean. All con-crit is good con-crit in my opinion because it can only make you better.

Thanks for the compliments and the advice :D