Raven runs for miles on a space station too small for both her and her running and she runs as fast as she can. Thank you for the physicality of Raven in this piece. Working out while her mother sleeps. Running in too small a space. This is so perfect.
And if she also aligns all the parts of herself just right under the only boy who's ever been family, then she's following the happy ending instructions book to a T. oy I love this and I hate this and idk how to feel about this but it's so bone-achingly true.
Raven runs for miles on a space station too small for both her and her running and she runs as fast as she can.
Right in the feels *wails* :((((
I absolutely love the paradox of your Raven -- the way being driven and excellent is her fatal flaw, because the world refuses to work the way it says it works. Not fair.
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RAVEN BY BBY GIRL OMG THIS IS SO PERFECT!
and heartbreaking, of course
Raven runs for miles on a space station too small for both her and her running and she runs as fast as she can.
Thank you for the physicality of Raven in this piece. Working out while her mother sleeps. Running in too small a space. This is so perfect.
And if she also aligns all the parts of herself just right under the only boy who's ever been family, then she's following the happy ending instructions book to a T.
oy
I love this and I hate this and idk how to feel about this but it's so bone-achingly true.
Bless.
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physicality is always something i aspire to, and i'm glad to hear it sometimes works out!
I love this and I hate this and idk how to feel about this but it's so bone-achingly true.
i intensely disliked myself for a while for writing that line
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Right in the feels *wails* :((((
I absolutely love the paradox of your Raven -- the way being driven and excellent is her fatal flaw, because the world refuses to work the way it says it works. Not fair.
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good, good. that was the intention. *evil laugh*
GLAD YOU LIKED IT, I hadn't written Raven in a while and I was nervous :D
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