round two: i'm learning your lesson (for doris)

May 11, 2015 17:54

title: I’m learning your lesson
recipient: doris
characters: blair-centric (mentions of serena, her parents, and nate, others more…less obvious.
rating: pg (mostly for angst, but with what I hope isn’t a hopeless ending which I know you didn’t want.)
word count: 600 and so.
summary: but then she learned what most didn’t. that it wasn’t the words ( Read more... )

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vergoldung May 12 2015, 06:33:01 UTC
Wowowow! I love this.

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lynzie914 May 14 2015, 02:59:03 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

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kwritten May 16 2015, 23:13:02 UTC
babe this is so spectacularly, heartbreakingly beautiful! you really made the prompt your own and it is sooo great! I love it so much!

xoxo

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lynzie914 May 18 2015, 23:59:23 UTC
your always way to nice to me, but thank you so much. I'm so happy you liked it.

and I totally had no idea what I was going to do with the silence prompt, but then it clicked and it (hopefuly) worked, so I'm glad you liked what I did with it. :D

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fluffyfrolicker May 21 2015, 07:28:49 UTC
I am late for everything these days, BUT THIS IS BEAUTIFUL, OKAY

THE PLAY WITH SILENCE AND WORDS, and silence hurting MORE, silence being louder

THE MIRROR PARENTHESES SCENE, HOW DID WE DESERVE YOU ON THIS EARTH, I WILL NOT, I CANNOT, THIS IS ALL I'VE EVER WANTED

A simple gesture of her hand or a tilt of her head or a sly smile across the room. And suddenly she was Queen B.

GUH. this image. MY BLAIR.

AND THE LAST SCENE. MIRROR AGAIN. YOU.

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lynzie914 May 27 2015, 22:16:35 UTC
NEVER WORRY ABOUT BEING LATE WITH ME. I AM LATE FOR EVERYTHING.

BUT YAY! I'm SO glad that you liked it and the whole silence hurting more for Blair.

THE MIRROR PARENTHESES SCENE, HOW DID WE DESERVE YOU ON THIS EARTH, I WILL NOT, I CANNOT, THIS IS ALL I'VE EVER WANTED

LOL, I don't think this was even my fault. You wanted mirrors and my mind went to fairytales because it does that when I'm writing fic and Blair is so the girl who would look in the mirror and think 'who's the fairest in the land?' even if she wouldn't say it outloud. Also she's Queen B. All these things have led us here.

GUH. this image. MY BLAIR.

All I could think of was Blair on the steps holding court and how she tilted her head at Serena or waved her hand for Jenny to move down and I mean she had to learn all that somehow.

I'm so glad you liked it. I hope it was even a little bit of what you were hoping for. :D

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