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[Round 1: Siblings] Behind The Scenes

Apr 27, 2015 01:19

Title: Behind The Scenes
Fandom: Harry Potter
Characters: slytherin!Ginny, Pansy, Daphne, Astoria
Rating: G
Word count: 730
Recipient: fluffyfrolicker
Summary: Slytherin girl bathroom. Ginny has a meltdown while getting ready.

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fandom: harry potter, round one

Comments 4

kwritten April 27 2015, 05:42:57 UTC

*dances*

A feminine suit and a red lip ; she is class personified.
I love this so much. You should write alll the time.

"Get off me, you brute!"
"But Pans, I love you!!!"
"Ew. Don't."
SOBBING IT'S EVERYTHING YES GOOD CUDDLY GINNY AND PANSY BEING DEPRECATING AND GINNY EATING IT ALL UP AND YES GOOD YES

So...stop being so clingy Pans and get out of my way already
YOU CRY AND YOUR TEARS ARE ALSO BLOOD

Loud noises of protest never stopped Ginny before and she keeps squishing until their tumultuous bundle of limbs crashes into the wall. "Thanks, girls. I really appreciate it."
LAKSDFJ LASETU ASLKDG ASPD FALSKDGH

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH BP.

You are sunshine and daisies.

snogged April 27 2015, 21:52:39 UTC

This was fabulous and funny.
Love the bickering and sisterly bonding going on between these four. :D

happyg_rl April 29 2015, 13:53:40 UTC

"Ew don't"
Probably the best line

Slytherin girls!!!!! Ahhhh my weakness. I love this so much. Ginny is so adorable and cuddly how do they resist her?
I love when the word feral is used to describe Pansy, it's absolutely spot-on.
This is cute and I love it. You're awesome.

fluffyfrolicker May 5 2015, 12:35:32 UTC

listen, El, you know i suck at many things, including but not limited to leaving proper comments on things and doing things on time, which is all an intro to my apology, which is me saying: YOU WERE SO WONDERFUL AND YOU WROTE THIS FOR ME AND I'M SORRY I'VE TAKEN SO MUCH TIME WITH THIS, i've read it a few times since you wrote it and LJ ate one comment i've written, but i am here now!

first of all, THIS IS LOVELY, EL.

SO, ONTO MY COMMENT:

OH MY, MY BABY GIRLS, ALL OF THEM IN ONE PLACE. i love how you describe them, Ginny growling and jumping to hug Pansy, Daphne's evil grin, Pansy's impatient tapping and MOTHERING OF GINNY, THAT WAS THE LOVELIEST THING TO EVER, Astoria shameless and leering and laughing!

No amount of whining will save you from this, Ginevra.

BLESS YOU, DARLIN.

♥

dorel 5eva