first for August

Aug 07, 2009 11:58



What do you know about me?
Things you should know about me:

I’m not clever with mirrors.
I do not blow smoke. Not me.

I’m not my clothes, hair, makeup, skin.
I am inside these things, me.

You make me laugh; I like that.
A great compliment, from me.

“I had a good time,” I say.
I mean it; believe you me.

I ask “want to come on in?”
I like you, trust you, me.

“Want to go to bed?” Too bold?
I want you to sleep with me.

“Good morning! Coffee?” I ask.
I want you to stay with me.

I’m not clever with mirrors.
I do not blow smoke, not me.

What do you know about me?
All this, you’ve learned about me.

This is the very first poem I've ever written! It is a Ghazal, sort of. I don't exactly understand how the rhyme scheme is supposed to work, but I followed all the other rules of Ghazals, I think. Oddly, it was easier with the Ghazal form; I tried free verse first, and I couldn't make it work.

Old dog! New tricks!
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