Decalphabet Challenge: K

[nekare]

Yay, I made the deadline! Sadly, though, I didn't get to make the deadline and have it betaed. My apologies.

Title: Kinetic
Author: nekare
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Fandom: Supernatural
Spoilers: None.
Warning: Incest.
Disclaimer: This story is based on characters and situations created and owned by Eric Kripke. No money is being made, and no

Comments

[sunshineclouds]

Te quiero o algo :) ¡¡Es que lo sabía!! Nada de que no está chidísimo porque lo está. Osea, tú dí y piensa lo que quieras de cómo escribes pero para mí es un placer absoluto leerte.
Además escribiste wincesto como pocas veces me encuentro. Osea, muchos se concentran en la tensión y el nc-17 y está bien, es chido. Pero cuando te dan eso y una buena, buena historia sobrenatural es mucho mejor; así como tu fic.
Y esa estructura de ¿decalfabeto?; bueno eso, estuvo genial.
Muchas, muchas gracias por compartirlo y por escribir :)

[nekare]

Y a mi me encanta ver tus comentarios, me hacen la vida toda alegre. ♥
Jaja, si vieras cuanto le sufrí con el fantasmita mentado? XD Pero muchas, muchas gracias, Sarah. :)

[crooked]

that. is. ASLHDLK GORGEOUS. i love how you built up to the ending, with all the tension and Sam just going all 'fuckit!' and kissing Dean. GUH.

this is so much love. SO MUCH. send this to Kripke. it can be a future episode, for real! ♥

[nekare]

*glomps* Haha, and wouldn't that be such a rating-raiser? New on the CW! Brothers and lovers! (or something equally corny) XDD

Thanks so much, hon. :)

[snubullownsyou]

laksdlajsdlasdjk OH MY. That is so fantastic. I freaking love Wincest, and this made me laugh and grin and flail all over with happiness. I love the way you build the tension up, and the ending was perfect. *loves* ♥

Oh, and this made me laugh hysterically too:

“Dude. You kinda just married a ghost,” Sam says, throat still raspy, and Dean snorts.

“Whatever, dude, she better don’t expect me to provide for her.”

hahahah oh mann. :)

[nekare]

Eeee! I'm sooo glad it did end up as feeling tense, and haha, that's one of my favorite parts as well XD Thanks, dear. :)

[anonymous]

I always love how the truly best first-time wincest stories contain the words "Sam, stop" or "Sammy, what are you doing?" right before the hotness ensues!

[nekare]

Hehe, it's almost like a rite of passage! *g*

[realpestilence]

This honestly made me all weak and trembly. It's been a long time since a fic's managed to do that. I'm pleased, surprised, and impressed.

Pesti

[nekare]

Oh, thank you! I'm so flattered. :)

[realpestilence]

Since you said you didn't have time for a beta, I hope you don't mind if I point out something I noticed?

“Whatever, man, don’t try and deny you didn’t love it.”

This should say either "don't try and claim you didn't love it" or "don't try and deny you loved it"; doesn't have to be "claim", just something like that. What you've got negates itself.

I re-read this and enjoyed it just as much. You said you have a problem plotting, but it didn't seem like it to me. I hope you write more wincest, for I've discovered a terrible weakness for it...!

Pesti

[nekare]

Oooh, thanks! I'll try and change that as soon as I can. :)

Hehe, we all seem to have a weakness for wincest, don't we? The pretty's just too powerful for us to ignore. *g*