Comments | muir_wolf: You Know I'll Put Us Back Together PART 2 (Doctor Who fanfic)

muir_wolf

You Know I'll Put Us Back Together PART 2 (Doctor Who fanfic)

Oct 10, 2009 16:06

Title: You Know I'll Put Us Back Together
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Pre-Martha/Ten, Pre-Donna/Jack if you squint.
Disclaimer: I'm poor, I own nothing, yadayadayada.
AN: This is because I’ve seen Martha-abused fics with Martha needing to be saved, and I’ve seen fics in which Martha’s screwed up because of the way the Doctor treated her, and this bunny ( Read more... )

z fandom: doctor who, z.character: jack harkness, z.character: donna noble, z.character: tenth doctor, fanfic, z.character: martha jones, z pairing: jack/donna, z pairing: ten/martha

Comments 15

mischief89 October 11 2009, 01:33:49 UTC

Wow. This was so dark but I loved every minute of it! You write everyone so well that I could imagine this all very well!

muir_wolf October 12 2009, 02:42:42 UTC

Aww thank you! Nothing better than hearing they're in character =)

persiflage_1 October 11 2009, 05:11:08 UTC

Wow! That was an amazing story... I love that you have Martha being too strong to accept help and then gradually, slowly, giving way to the Doctor, Jack and Donna's desire to help her.

muir_wolf October 12 2009, 02:43:27 UTC

Martha is ah-maze-ing, but I do feel she's got a stubborn streak the size of...um...something really big, haha...glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!

persiflage_1 October 12 2009, 04:17:42 UTC

Oh yeah - Martha's stubborn streak's at least a mile wide. It'd need to be, to deal with her family (and then to survive the Doctor and all the crap he put her through!)

(The comment has been removed)

muir_wolf October 12 2009, 02:46:14 UTC

And you are too kind! 10/Martha is always good when it's a bit dark, I think...And I do plan to write a sequel, but it'll take me a week or so probably. Thanks for the review! ;)

supasass October 11 2009, 22:43:23 UTC

This was beautiful. I loved how you portrayed Martha's strength and her will and how that can push someone right to the high, sharp, edge. Brilliant

muir_wolf October 12 2009, 02:49:04 UTC

I love Martha, but she really did have to put up with some BS. I mean, walk the planet for a *year*? Really, Doctor? So I wrote this, and I'm fairly ecstatic that you think I wrote her well, because she is *brilliant* and I'd hate to short-change her. Thanks for the sweet review!

catholicphoton October 21 2009, 11:03:24 UTC

I enjoyed your dark, angsty and beautiful fic enormously! It makes me want to hug Martha (and the Doctor). Nothing is easy for her!

muir_wolf October 29 2009, 08:57:43 UTC

It really never is =/ At some point I'm going to write some full-out fluff for the poor girl, since I tend towards angsty!DW fic. Ach, well. Thanks for the review!!