you were saved by the good book, i was saved by the half full glass
I'm kind of...stuck with something I'm writing. I just feel uncomfortable with how I'm writing, and over-thinking everything, and generally being an idiot and completely blocked when it comes to putting words on paper.
What I'm looking for is any sort of constructive criticism on anything I've ever written, or just general concrit on my writing as a whole. Just tell me what I do wrong, and what I do terribly, and what just doesn't work, so I can try to fix it rather than staring glumly at my screen, knowing something isn't working but at a complete loss as to what.
Be as specific or broad as you're comfortable with, and Anon commenting is on, and IP logging is off.
Seriously, please, anything would help, I'm driving myself insane. And look at it this way - you can't make me feel worse than I already do! ♥
(A list of my fic is here, if that'd help.)
What I'm looking for is any sort of constructive criticism on anything I've ever written, or just general concrit on my writing as a whole. Just tell me what I do wrong, and what I do terribly, and what just doesn't work, so I can try to fix it rather than staring glumly at my screen, knowing something isn't working but at a complete loss as to what.
Be as specific or broad as you're comfortable with, and Anon commenting is on, and IP logging is off.
Seriously, please, anything would help, I'm driving myself insane. And look at it this way - you can't make me feel worse than I already do! ♥
(A list of my fic is here, if that'd help.)