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[muffledvelvet]

another fragment. I've noticed I haven't been posting the full pieces here as often as I do in a few other places around the world, but I'll try to remedy that in the coming weeks. hopefully I'll get this long ass shag trimmed out of the way and back into manageable hair. did I say that? indie kids need to learn tidiness. heh heh. but I love them

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[chemreaction]

"I'll take her lipstick out, / and write my last letter on her mirror, / in permanent marker. Using / the lipstick to give my lips the color"

those lines are ... interesting. at first i didn't like it because i had this image in my head of a person writing in lipstick, which was then destroyed by the permanent marker. but the more i read it, the more i begin to like it. the disruption seems to fit.

[muffledvelvet]

I thought it would be interesting to take the typical image of lipstick writing on the mirror and twist it on people. Make them think it happened one way and then tell them it didn't. glad it made it's effect work for someone.